mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

[Ali_2]

yeh baja k husn hi husn hai meray gird o paish magar nahien
teri aarzoo kii hadood mein kisii aarzoo ka guzar nahien

wo kaleem thay jo behal gye teri barq zair e naqaab say
jo tajaliyon say ho mutmain wo mera mazaaq e nazar nahien

yeh khyal e kham na kar kabhi k ghulam e waqt hai aadmii
teri zindgii kii bulandiyaan yeh nazam e shams o qmar nahien

yeh baja k deer o haram mein hain teri azmaton kii alamatien
meray dil ko apna yaqeen dila mujhay aitbar e nazar nahien

yeh maraqbay yeh makashfay yeh mujhahaday yeh majadalay
teri manzilien hain yeh waqa’ii k mujhey shaoor e safar nahien

yeh hajoom e lala chaman chaman yeh ghata mein barq ka bankpan
ho sajood e shoaq mein rukh kidher teri jalwa gaah kidher nahien

meri justajoo kii rasaiyaan hain teray hadood e jamal tak
mujhay do jhaan say gharaz hii kya meri do jhaan pay nazar nahien

meray sajda haaye dil o nazar, hain kharab kab say idher udher
mujhay is qdar to pata chalay k kidher hain aap kidher nahien

yeh qyaam gaah ka hai asar k maal par bhi nazar nahien
hai safar ka waqt qareeb tar magar ikhtmam e safar nahien

mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya
teri aarzoo ka kamal hai , meri shairy ka hunar nahien

yeh chaman yeh danish e be-nawa jo ghira hai abr sharar fishan
kisi samrii ka hai shobda yeh sehar to merii sehar nahien

[Aqls]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

bohat hi khoobsoorat kalaam share kiya hai.
agar shayar ka naam pata ho tau zaroor bataiyega

shukriyaah

[Sheal]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

bohoot khoob Ali :k:

[Koyal]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

meray sajda haaye dil o nazar, hain kharab kab say idher udher
mujhay is qdar to pata chalay k kidher hain aap kidher nahien

kaash pata chalay wo kidher haiN
nice sharing

[muncho]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@Koyal

meray sajda haaye dil o nazar, hain kharab kab say idher udher
mujhay is qdar to pata chalay k kidher hain aap kidher nahien

kaash pata chalay wo kidher haiN
nice sharing

agar pata chul jaey tau ‘WO’ wo nahi rahta

[muncho]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

maareyfut ki bulundiyun pe rah kar shahkaar likha gaya hay; bahut aala kalaam g

[Ali_2]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@Koyal

meray sajda haaye dil o nazar, hain kharab kab say idher udher
mujhay is qdar to pata chalay k kidher hain aap kidher nahien

** kaash pata chalay wo kidher haiN**
nice sharing

@muncho

maareyfut ki bulundiyun pe rah kar shahkaar likha gaya hay; bahut aala kalaam g

Thanks

[SinlneR]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

khoob, at the top of its quality..
very nicely written, i really admire it.

thank alot for sharing.!

[Koyal]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@Ali

:halo: ap ko pata hia kia

[Ali_2]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@SinlneR

khoob, at the top of its quality..
very nicely written, i really admire it.

thank alot for sharing.!

thanks

@Koyal

:halo: ap ko pata hia kia

Nahin

[Koyal]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

^ dantoN se tu lag raha pata hia

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@Ali

yeh baja k deer o haram mein hain teri azmaton kii alamatien
meray dil ko apna yaqeen dila mujhay aitbar e nazar nahien

meri justajoo kii rasaiyaan hain teray hadood e jamal tak
mujhay do jhaan say gharaz hii kya meri do jhaan pay nazar nahien

meray sajda haaye dil o nazar, hain kharab kab say idher udher
mujhay is qdar to pata chalay k kidher hain aap kidher nahien

]

bohat bohat khoob :k:
poet kon hai

[Koyal]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

beach maiN aytbaar ka lufz hia tu aytbaar sajid ki hona hia

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@Koyal

beach maiN aytbaar ka lufz hia tu aytbaar sajid ki hona hia

last shair mai to aitbar nahi

[muncho]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@Shab-e-Hijar

last shair mai to aitbar nahi

aakhree shair main 1. danish 2. saamri aur sahar; in teeno main se koi aik???

[deadsoul]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

buhat zabardast hai ali
khoob

[bheegiyaad]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

too gud:k:

[bholibisri]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@muncho

aakhree shair main 1. danish 2. saamri aur sahar; in teeno main se koi aik???

chaman ve hai tusi bhol raya :D

[bholibisri]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

achi post hia ali sha'er kon hia ji :)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: mujhay bazm khoob khay to kya mujhay daad e shair milay to kya

@bholibisri

achi post hia ali sha’er kon hia ji

Ali nay khud likhi hai