Re: mujhay au'rnay day aziyatain meri adatain na kharab kar
Umdaa Bohat Umda
na sama'aaton main tappash ghulay na nazar ko waqf e azaab kar
Jo suna'ee day ussay chup sikha jo dikha'ee day ussay khwab kar
abhi muntashir na ho ajnabi na vissaal- e-rutt k karam jata
jo teri talaash main gum huay kabi un dinon ka hisaab kar
meray sabar pe koi ajar keon meri dehleez pe ye abar kyoon
mujhay au'rnay day azi'atain meri adatain na kharab kar
kahin aablon k bhanwar main kahin dhoop roop badan main sajain
kabi dil ko thall ka mizaj day kabhi chashm e tar ko chanab kar
ye hujoom har sitam garan na sunay ga teri sada kabi
meri hasraton ko sukhan suna meri khwahishon say khitab kar
ye juloos e fassl e bahaar hai tehi dasst yaar saja issay
koi ashk phir say sharar bana kar zakhm phir say gulaab kar
tumhein jab kabhi milein fursatein, merey dil sey bojh utaar do
main bohat dino sey udaas hoon mujhey koi shaam udhaar do
mujhey apney roop ki dhoop do keh chamak sakein merey khaal-o-khad
mujhey apney rang mein rang do, merey sarey zang utaar do
Re: mujhay au'rnay day aziyatain meri adatain na kharab kar
very rythmic.. if you know that name of the poet, do let me know...
you know I always look for poet's name for many reasons....
Like I can relate it to his/her other piece of poetry, compare it with what I have so far read about the poet's litrature personality or what is my own perception about the poet.... and many other factors.... it makes me understand the idea and thoughts behind the writting... If it's a new poet, I have an avenue to explore some one new....
Like they say, it is always good to put a face with a name... similarly my philosophy is that it's always good to put a name with a poem... :)
Re: mujhay au'rnay day aziyatain meri adatain na kharab kar
very rythmic.. if you know that name of the poet, do let me know...
you know I always look for poet's name for many reasons....
Like I can relate it to his/her other piece of poetry, compare it with what I have so far read about the poet's litrature personality or what is my own perception about the poet.... and many other factors.... it makes me understand the idea and thoughts behind the writting... If it's a new poet, I have an avenue to explore some one new....
Like they say, it is always good to put a face with a name... similarly my philosophy is that it's always good to put a name with a poem... :)
thanks i will try to b philospher next time and find poet name :)
like your sig :)
Re: mujhay au’rnay day aziyatain meri adatain na kharab kar
ap khud dekho pic main dil hath main leay phir rehi hain ap ko koyal ka kia pata hona hai..i guess that’s how much ppl love koyal k aik ajnabi main koyal ko dhoondh rhaya:D ..shaki mizaj aurat..me samj sirf mard he shak kartey
