Mujh se pehlay tujhe jis shaks nay chaha us ne.....

Mujh se pehlay tujhe jis shakhs ne chaha us ne
Shaiyad ab bhi tera gham dil se laga rakha ho
aik benaam si umeed pe ab bhi shaiyad
Apne khwaboon key jazeron ko saja rakah ho

Main ne mana key wo be-gana-e paiyman-e- wafa
kho chuka hai jo kisi aur ki ranaiye main
shaiyad key ab laut key aiye na teri mahfil main
aur koi dukh na rulaiye tujhe tanhai main

Mian ne mana key shab-o- rooz key hangamon main
waqt har gham ko bhula deta hai rafta rafta
chahiye umeed ki shamayen hon key yadoon key chiragh
mustaqil-e-bood bujha deta hai rafta rafta

Phir bhi mazi ka khiyal ata hai gahey gahye
mudateen dard ki lo kam to nahi kar sakteen
zakham bhar jaiyen magar dagh to rah jata hai
duriyon se kabhi yadeen to nahi mar sakteen

ye bhi mumkin hai key aik din wo pasheman ho kar
tere pass aiye zamane se kinara kar laiye
tu key masoom bhi hai zood faramosh bhi hai
us ki peman shikani ko bhi gawara kar laiye

Aur main jis ne tujhe apna maseha samjha
aik zakhm aur bhi pahley ki tarah sah jaoon
jis pe pahley bhi kai ahd-e-wafa totey hain
isi dorahey pe chup chap khara rah jaoon.

Re: Mujh se pehlay tujhe jis shaks nay chaha us ne…

kahiye to aasamaa.N ko zamii.n par utaar laaye.N
mushkil nahii.n hai kuchh bhii agar Thaan liijiye

GuUd SHaRiNG TuMbIn :bb:

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itne jalde parh bhee lee ?

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janabah new page meIn OpEn Ki Hui ThI :akalnaitaymaujaanhemaujaan:

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ok thanks then
:sheen:

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yeh rOsE wALa EmOtIoN mAsT hai I lIkE It :bravo:

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yea rite… roses kisay buray lag saktay hain

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jiskO alErGy Ho :hehe:

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Waha kiya baat hai... Khush rahoo

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nice one tum bin and ^ welcome back dilse kahan gum ho gaye ap

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Awesome :bb:

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WoWWWWW...

I like the flow and the originality of thoughts... :-)

zakham bhar jaiyen magar dagh to rah jata hai
duriyon se kabhi yadeen to nahi mar sakteen

reminds me of a phrase I read somewhere: Tum jaantaY ho rifaaqataiN mukhtasir bhee hoti haiN, magar yaadaiN mukhtasir naheeN hoteeN :~)

and I have answered this phrase myself though it was not a question but to me it felt like one: HaaN! magar kuch yaadaiN zehreeli zaroor hoti haiN :)

jis pe pahley bhi kai ahd-e-wafa totey hain
isi dorahey pe chup chap khara rah jaoon.

sigh la'b-e-khamosh saY afshaa ho gaa
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one word zabardast :k:
isi khushi mein :bb:

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Shukria :bb:

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Thanks AQ bhai :bb:

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Thanks koyal , Dilsay , , sonia , being lonely :bb:

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The best posted so far. Bohat hi zabardast nazm hey. Beautifully put :k: Thanx tum_bin for sharing this beauty with us … Baad meiN kam-az-kam aek baar to aur zaroor parrhooN ga.

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:hugz:

U have posted one of my most fav poems dear :slight_smile:

beautiful..

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Thank u :slight_smile:

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:slight_smile: its my favourite tooo