Mujh se mohabbat ka jikr karte ho....

rajey · February 17, 2010, 10:11am

**Mujh se mohabbat ka jikra na kiya kar
Yaar kisi aur gham ki baat kar
Tu kisi aur sitam ki baat kar
Yaar kisi aur bharam ki baat kar

Woh mulakaaten kyo yaad karte ho
Hansi raaten kyo yaad karte ho
Meethi baaten kyo yaad karte ho
Mujh pe kuchh to raham ki baat kar

Mujhse u dushmani nibhao na
Chala gaya wo, tum bhi jao na
Dil e ghayal ko yun satao na
Ummeed jaye sambhal, wo baat kar
**

Shazia_Arif · February 17, 2010, 5:09pm

Re: Mujh se mohabbat ka jikr karte ho....

nice bt dost wo hota hai jo sach bataye so frankly speakin wazan se thori si bahar thi, or ooper ghalti se hasni likh dia hai jise shayad haseen hona chahiye...hope u'll nt mind my chritisism.

rajey · February 18, 2010, 5:53am

Dear Shazia, u can't imagine how much your critisism favour me.

"Hansi", haseen ka " hansi' " form hai - meaning is same but wahi shayad hindi me likhne ki aadat se urdu ko dekhne se gad-bad (galti-walti) si lag rahi hai

Rahi baat wazan ki, when u commenting.... wazan dheeray-dheeray aa hi jayega.