Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

sunny_nicky January 23, 2007, 10:26pm 1

Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main
Main bohat baykhud hoa tha,ik safar ki raat main

jany kis ki yaad thi k ik manzar dekh kar
toot kar main roo para tha!ik safar ki raat main

Woh k jis sayy umar bhar ki Doryian mansoob hain
Mery seenay sy laga tha ik safar ki raat main

Har taraf phaily hoye thy yaad-e-gham k silsilay
Kitna mushkil raasta tha, ik safar ki raat main

ghar sy bahar paon rakhty hi Laraz uth-ta hai Dil
Hadsa aisa hoa tha Ik safar ki raat main

Aaj bhi Gungunata hon usy tanhai main
Geet jo humny suna tha Ik safar ki raat main

Shab-e-Hijar January 24, 2007, 1:02am 2

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

Nice1 :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh January 24, 2007, 8:15am 3

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

Very nice sunny:-)

sunny_nicky November 13, 2007, 5:01pm 4

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

thxx gul

Daanie November 14, 2007, 5:05am 5

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

buhut khoob :)

redidentity November 14, 2007, 12:14pm 6

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:k:

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system November 14, 2007, 12:15pm 7

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

nice!

Starlight November 14, 2007, 11:51pm 8

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too much to take in one night...

sunny_nicky November 17, 2007, 9:59pm 9

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

:P

NikamiJano November 17, 2007, 11:28pm 10

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

nice one sunny lakin new karo na purani keoN la rahya :)

goodnews November 18, 2007, 2:53am 11

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Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main
Main bohat baykhud hoa tha,ik safar ki raat main

Wah!

ghazal_kisi_ke November 18, 2007, 5:23am 12

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

Woh k jis sayy umar bhar ki Doryian mansoob hain

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Aryaan November 18, 2007, 9:55am 13

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Good One Sunny..:)

Tribute to the Rawalpindi Express Shoaib Akhtar

ASA November 18, 2007, 10:25am 14

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Sheal November 18, 2007, 6:54pm 15

Re: Mujh ko ik hamdam mila tha,ik safar ki raat main

very nice sunny :k:

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sunny_nicky November 18, 2007, 8:16pm 16

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thx all of u :)