Mujee khabar thi...

[Rameesha]

Mujee khabar thi
keh bad-e-saba key jhoonkey ko
main apni sansooN mein kochh dair rook sakta hoon
guloon ki khushboo bhi kochh hi dair sath dey gi mera
woh naghma jo keh sama’at mein rang bakhairta he
rahey ga is ka aahang
bas gharhi ki gharhi
rah-e-hayaat mein, is rangeen roshni ka khumaar
bas agley mourh pe muj sey bichhrharhney wala he
meri tumaam musafat, rahey gi lahasil
main janta tha
main janta tha magar keya kissi ko batlata
is aarzi sey ta’aluq mein, kitna jeewan tha
is faraib mein, kitna sakoon penhaan tha

[Jaan_Lewaa]

Re: Mujee khabar thi…

*Originally posted by Rameesha: *
Mujee khabar thi
keh bad-e-saba key jhoonkey ko
main apni sansooN mein kochh dair rook sakta hoon
guloon ki khushboo bhi kochh hi dair sath dey gi mera
woh naghma jo keh sama’at mein rang bakhairta he
rahey ga is ka aahang
bas gharhi ki gharhi
rah-e-hayaat mein, is rangeen roshni ka khumaar
bas agley mourh pe muj sey bichhrharhney wala he
meri tumaam musafat, rahey gi lahasil
main Jaanta tha
main Jaanta tha magar keya kissi ko batlata
is aarzi sey ta’aluq mein, kitna jeewan tha
is faraib mein, kitna sakoon penhaan tha

bhut achay:k:

[Dilsay]

Jaab pata tha

Jaab sub kuch pata tha... tu phir aab malal kasa

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

beautiful:k:
keep posting:)

[arifnawaz1]

Bahut khoob :k::k::k:

[Rameesha]

Re: Jaab pata tha

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Jaab sub kuch pata tha... tu phir aab malal kasa
[/QUOTE]

Arrey sahab koyi malal naheen, agar koyi ho ga bhi to likhney waley ko hi pata ho ga ..waisey bhi nazm key aakhri misrey sabit kartey hain keh shair ko bhi is pe malal naheen he:) .. main ney to eik kahani key beech mein issey parha to kahani key pasmanzar key sath achhi lagi to post kar di :)

[chand_chehra]

very nice :k:

[Dragon_King]

buhat khoob

[Azad]

[QUOTE]
is faraib mein, kitna sakoon penhaan tha
[/QUOTE]

U have a good taste ... thanks for sharing

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Very Nice Rameesha Jii:)