~~~muhabbat or kahane~~~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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tumheen kaisay bataeen hum
muhabbat or kahane main koi rishta naheen hota
kahane main
to hum vapis be aa jatay hain
muhabbat main palatnay ka koi rusta naheen hota
kahane or muhabbat main ek mour aaisa be aata hay
jahan aa kar kahane har jatee hay
kahane main to kuch kirdar hum khud farz kartay hain
muhabbat main koi be kirdar farzee naheen hota
kahane ko kayee kirdar
mil jul kar kaheen aagay chalatay hain
muhabbat apnay kirdaroon ko khud aagay barh’hate hay
kahane main kaee kirdar
zinda he naheen rahtay
muhabbat apnay kirdaron ko marnay naheen dete
kahane kay safar main
manziloon ke dhool urrte hay
leken
muhabbat ke musafat rah geron ko bikharnay
he naheen dete

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Re: ~~~muhabbat or kahane~~~

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*Originally posted by baziger: *

tumheen kaisay bataeen hum
muhabbat or kahane main koi rishta naheen hota
kahane main
to hum vapis be aa jatay hain
muhabbat main palatnay ka koi rusta naheen hota
kahane or muhabbat main ek mour aaisa be aata hay
jahan aa kar kahane har jatee hay
kahane main to kuch kirdar hum khud farz kartay hain
muhabbat main koi be kirdar farzee naheen hota
kahane ko kayee kirdar
mil jul kar kaheen aagay chalatay hain
muhabbat apnay kirdaroon ko khud aagay barh'hate hay
kahane main kaee kirdar
zinda he naheen rahtay
muhabbat apnay kirdaron ko marnay naheen dete
kahane kay safar main
manziloon ke dhool urrte hay
leken
muhabbat ke musafat rah geron ko bikharnay
he naheen dete

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all is very good but just in MY opinion........... how abt if u change MOHABAT in to AFSANA.............

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bahut khoob!

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Re: Re: ~~~muhabbat or kahane~~~

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*Originally posted by -=Janu Jia=-: *

all is very good but just in MY opinion........... how abt if u change MOHABAT in to AFSANA.............
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well..janu jiathis is upto the poet that what he put in his poem or ghazal... this one is also by a well known poet*Saleem Kousar*.. i have a little bit know how abt poetry so in my opinion here "muhabbat" is more suitable than "Afsana".

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So Beautiful… You’ve got a lovely Choice :k:.. Thanks for sharing..

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Beautiful, bohat achi hai :k::k::k:

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thanks a lot ...
*Mehfil
Philanthrope
Vivacious *

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very nice.. :k:

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zabardast

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beautiful:flower1::flower2: