muhabbat ki talash mein janey walo

jhansi_ki_rani · September 5, 2006, 8:06am

Muhabbat ki talash mein janey walo
Tumhen kya malooom
K ye nahi milti dhoondney sey
Ye to kar leti hai dilon mein basera
khamoshi sey
khud aan milti hai
kisi meherban ki tara
khud hi baras jati hai
pyasey dil pe
abr-e-meherban ki tara
to ruk jao or in tizaar karo
us waqt ka
jab ye tum PE meherban ho gi!!!
<O:p</O:p

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 5, 2006, 8:17am

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lekin pata kaesey chalay ga, keh kab aaey gi ar kab mehrban hogi as u said pehli lines mein, keh chupkey sey khamoshi sey dil mein basera kartii hay so hum kya kar saktey hein uss waqt kay liye tell tell :~)

jhansi_ki_rani · September 5, 2006, 8:19am

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***sabar:) :halo: ***

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 5, 2006, 8:21am

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yeh kya baat hui bhala :p i was asking somthing other well:-)

jhansi_ki_rani · September 5, 2006, 8:31am

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doosra mashwara dngrs hai, sandel parney ka imkaan hai is liye leave dat

Amal · September 5, 2006, 10:35am

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I like the theme of this poem. Bohat khoobsoorat khayaal hey jo aksar hameiN nahi aata aur hum taqdeer ke dhaagoN ko apney haathoN meiN ley kar khuwa-mukha uljha beitthtey heiN. Thanx for highlighting and sharing this khayaal rani.

Sannan · September 6, 2006, 2:33am

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Bhat Khoub Raani G to youn kahiye na "Muhabaat key naheen Jati, Ho Jati Hay ........

jhansi_ki_rani · September 6, 2006, 5:00am

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thx amal k aap ko ye theme pasand aya

sanan g kan ko chahey is taraf sey pakren ya us taraf sey pakarna to kan hi hai na?

Prince_Ali · September 6, 2006, 2:51pm

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very nice :k:

jhansi_ki_rani · September 9, 2006, 4:18am

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thx prince

goodnews · September 9, 2006, 12:30pm

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K ye nahi milti dhoondney sey
Ye to kar leti hai dilon mein basera
khamoshi sey

Kia bat hy Jhansi ki rani yeh kuch aysy hi hy ky koi hazar bras ki ibadat ky bad bhi Allah ku nahi dhond sakta koi pal bhar main pa lyta hy(Sofiism some people don' like it but it does exist) Khty hain na, Ag lyny gay or pyghambari mil gai. and jysa ky Darwesh ky signatures hain
Muhabbat Khuda hy
**Khuda hy Muhabat **
Mandrja bala shyr prh kr meri bat ki tasqid shaid ho jay:)

Muslim_girl_1 · September 10, 2006, 3:16am

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very nice…:k:

jhansi_ki_rani · September 17, 2006, 2:48pm

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thanks muslim

mahamkhan · September 28, 2006, 8:58am

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Gud work!