Muhabbat kar k aae ho......!

abeeha · July 10, 2008, 8:35am

Bohat betaab lagte ho
muhabbat kar k aae ho!
kisi pal chen hy tum ko
na baaton men tawazan hy
bohat abaad lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!

**jo poocha hy sabab tum se **
zara si badhawasi ka
to rukh phera hy yun tum ne
k ankhen bol na paen
bohat anjaan lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!

baraste sawan men tum ne
jo mera hath thama hy
wo ankhon ki shararat se
jo ik hisaar khencha hy
bohat bebaak lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!

abhi ye baat hy kal ki
k chanchal shokh the tum b
par ye weraan si ankhen
men ik pal ko b dekhon to
bohat barbaad lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!

**muje tum kyun **
kisi banjar zamin ki piyaas lagte ho
bohat sunsaan lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!
bohat heraan lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho…!

redidentity · July 10, 2008, 9:08am

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Abeeha.. its wonderful..

abeeha · July 10, 2008, 11:23am

thank u soooo much RI…

S.786 · July 11, 2008, 6:10am

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buhut lajawaab poetry........v.good abeha

hiba_no.1 · July 11, 2008, 9:23am

very nice :k:

abeeha · July 11, 2008, 9:47am

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thanx S.786 nd hiba...

Precious_Khan · July 12, 2008, 2:28pm

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Buhat Aalaa :~)

abeeha · July 12, 2008, 2:32pm

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thank u so much PK..so nice of u.

muncho · July 14, 2008, 11:12am

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bohat abaad lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!

bohat barbaad lagte ho
Muhabbat kar k aae ho!
ye tazaad kaisa?

baqi achee koshish, aala!

Dubaiwali · July 14, 2008, 11:18am

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zabardast!! keep it up

abeeha · July 14, 2008, 5:00pm

muhabbat mukhtalif kisam k tazad se mil kr hi wajood men aati hy..is men sab aik sa nhi hota....insan kabhi barbaad hota hy to kbhi abaad.

_dArd · July 14, 2008, 7:02pm

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Wah
bOht KhOob
Umda kOshish hAi Aap Kii

redidentity · July 15, 2008, 4:04am

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@ muncho's msg.. n geo k host ka style..

Ye to khula tazaad hai.. :@:

muncho · July 15, 2008, 3:27pm

lolz nahi aisa kuch nahi tha me tu thori wazahat chah raha tha jo k mil gaee :)

abeeha · July 15, 2008, 4:53pm

to it means ap wazahat se satisfy ho gae?

muncho · July 16, 2008, 1:40pm

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wazahat tuk tu itminaan hay, laikin nazeriya ya fulsafa mohubt ka mairey nazdeek mukhtalif hey, shayud ye nazam jo intekhab me share ki gaee thee bahter bayaan hey mairay tasawur ka :):
koi zangeer ho
aahan ki, chandani ki, riwayat ki
mahaubat toR sakti hai
yeh aisi dhaal hai jis per
zamanay ki kisi talwaar ka sika nahi chalta
agar chasm-e-tamasha may zara si milaawat ho
yeh aaiina nahi chalta
yeh aisi aag hai jis may
badan showloN may jaltay haiN to rooheiN muskurati haiN
yeh woh selaab hai jis ko
diloN ki bastiyaaN aawaaz day kar khud bulaati haiN
yeh jub chahay kisi bhi khuwab ko taabir mil jaye
jo manzar bujh chukay hain in ko bhi tanweer mill jaye
dua jo be thikaana thi usay taaseer mill jaye
kisi rishtay may raasta poochti taqdeer mill jaye
mahaubat rok sakti hai kisi girtay sitaray ko yeh chakna choor aaiinay ki kirchein joR sakti hai
jidhar chahein yeh baagein moR sakti hai
koi zanjeer ho us ko mahaubat toR sakti hai

abeeha · July 16, 2008, 4:29pm

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its also nice..ab sab ka point of view different hota hy...agar sab ka aik jesa ho to kon kise parhe ga...koi attraction nhi rehti....

muncho · July 16, 2008, 6:52pm

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g sahi farmaya aap ne

SinlneR · July 24, 2008, 11:31am

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kya apko pata hain. ke app bohot bohot infact bohoot acha likhti ho.
ofcourse pata hoga.. coz tht was awesome..

dont need to read the whole to justify it.. just the first two lines were enough..
so fluent and yet soo deep.

tht was amazing..

hatts of to u madame.!!!

abeeha · July 24, 2008, 1:09pm

thank u soo much sinlner…ap ne kuch zada hi tareef kar di…