*MuHaBbAt Ka DhUaN*

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: MuHaBbAt Ka DhUaN

@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

**yehii k aaKhiri she’r kii dusrii line jo hai:

jo is ko dekhta hai zindagi ko chorr jata hai…

is meN red color meN jo likhaa hai use zindagaanii kar deN…qawaafii men zindagaanii aanaa chaahiye na k zindagii correct misr’a yuN honaa chaahiye:

jo isko dekhtaa hai zindagaanii chhoR jaataa hai

isii taraH dusre she’r ke dusre misr’e meN lafz ma’nii [singular] nahiiN hai bal k ma’aanii [plural] hai…

**or apni khamoshi k bhi wo ma’aanii chorr jata hai
**
…tasHeeH [correction] farmaa lijiye
**

okay g my pleasure…zara iss tara ki tasih meri apni poetry main b ker dia karain