MuHaBbAt Ka DhUaN

Shazia_Arif · February 13, 2011, 1:54pm

Muhabbat ka dhuaan ankhon main pani chorr jata hai
keh jis restay se gham guzre nishani chorr jata hai

hamari guftagu se bhi wo qayal nhi hota
or apni khamoshi k bhi wo mani chorr jata hai

bharosa jis pe ho us se twaqo koi na rakhna
yehi ikk saiba(n) be saibani chorr jata hai

bicharr k bhi ham aise shakhs se bichrra nhi kerte
jo ikk fiqra ada kar k kahani chorr jata hai

SAGAR maot b kam khubsurat to nhi ho gi
jo is ko dekhta hai zindagi ko chorr jata hai…

fara · February 13, 2011, 2:55pm

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Buhat achay...

Innocent_Smile · February 13, 2011, 3:29pm

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aala :k:

Shazia_Arif · February 13, 2011, 3:34pm

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thanx both of you.

IS · February 13, 2011, 4:46pm

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bohat nice :-)

Shazia_Arif · February 14, 2011, 11:14am

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thanx paen :p

ehsan · February 14, 2011, 11:39am

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wah, wah bauhat achha.

pktun · February 14, 2011, 12:26pm

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**Awsome

Sagar** :k:

Faris_Udeen · February 14, 2011, 12:53pm

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Waah bohat alaa

Shazia_Arif · February 15, 2011, 5:12am

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thanx all :)

Shazia_Arif · February 15, 2011, 5:13am

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thanx chachu but have seen you here first time

muddii · February 15, 2011, 8:10am

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Buhat Umdah:)

Daanie · February 16, 2011, 4:22am

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nice sharing :)

Amal · February 16, 2011, 2:24pm

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Kya baat hey…bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey…:k:

Maqtey ke misra-e-saani meiN lafz zindagi nahi balkey zindagani hey. Taseeh farma lijeeye

Shazia_Arif · February 16, 2011, 3:06pm

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ab jo likha hai uss ka tarjuma ker k batain

Amal · February 16, 2011, 3:22pm

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Kis ko? Aek afsaana-nigaar ko?

Shazia_Arif · February 16, 2011, 3:39pm

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don’t try to kachi me jis bat ka na pata ho pooch leni chahiye

Amal · February 16, 2011, 3:40pm

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Ab itni bhi chuchu nahi heiN aap

Shazia_Arif · February 17, 2011, 4:17am

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hoon na mera siggi dekhain,my nick is live for others

KKF · February 17, 2011, 4:28am

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**yehii k aaKhiri she’r kii dusrii line jo hai:

jo is ko dekhta hai zindagi ko chorr jata hai…

is meN red color meN jo likhaa hai use zindagaanii kar deN…qawaafii men zindagaanii aanaa chaahiye na k zindagii correct misr’a yuN honaa chaahiye:

jo isko dekhtaa hai zindagaanii chhoR jaataa hai

isii taraH dusre she’r ke dusre misr’e meN lafz ma’nii [singular] nahiiN hai bal k ma’aanii [plural] hai…

**or apni khamoshi k bhi wo ma’aanii chorr jata hai
**
…tasHeeH [correction] farmaa lijiye
**

*MuHaBbAt Ka DhUaN*

MuHaBbAt Ka DhUaN