Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat,

                              Kahay Ja Raha Hun,  Bus Keay Ja Raha Hun...








                                                             Khawab.Rung
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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

Looks like your own creation. In that case, it should be moved to Shora-e-Gupshup. Please confirm :)

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

:k: :slight_smile:

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

dear, Amal poetry section are here. not shore-e-gup. its shairy not gupshup so i posted here.

and kindly chk this one. k lahRain aa’j taak sahil pay apna saR patakhti haiN](http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/487782-k-lahrain-aaj-taak-sahil-pay-apna-sar-patakhti-hain.html)
na-'janaY kia kaha doobnay walay nay samandeR se k lahRain aa’j taak sahil pay apna saR patakhti haiN
Started by Koyal, Mar 8th, 2011 08:08 AM
yeh b to sirf 1 shair he hay g.

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

Nice One KhawabaRung..:)

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

thanks Aryaan

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

Azizi meiN ney aap sey ye poocha tha ke agar to ye sheir aap ka apna likha huwa hey (you as the poet, not the poster) to isey Shora-e-Gupshup meiN hona chahiye…otherwise it’s fine here. That’s it :slight_smile:

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

:k:

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Re: Muhabat Buri Hai, Buri Hai Muhabat (1-Shair)

THANKS AMAL G. THANKS ALOT.