MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

@khansadath

Pehle to
Bahut acha shair share karne keliye bahut shukriya

with no offence!
“tabey” ke spelling galat haiN
it shoud be “تابِ پرواز” (Tab-e-Parwaz = the power to fly) and not **تابع پرواز **" (Tabey parwaz = Subservient fly) ??? it doesnt make sense in this particular stanza..

by the way i enjoyed the shair with thanks.

u r right :k: