MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

itna manoos huwe qafas se :hinna:

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

Pehle to
Bahut acha shair share karne keliye bahut shukriya

with no offence!
"tabey" ke spelling galat haiN
it shoud be "تابِ پرواز" (Tab-e-Parwaz = the power to fly) and not *تابع پرواز *" (Tabey parwaz = Subservient fly) ??? it doesnt make sense in this particular stanza..

by the way i enjoyed the shair with thanks.

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

MENE NAH
ILIKHE :blush:
shair ko dhundty hein
vese ap sahi keh rhy hein

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

u r right :k:

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

jinhein ghulami ki aadat ho jaey unhein azad bhi kar dein woh ghulam rehna hi pasand karein gy

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

jinhe gandasa movies dekhne ki aadat pad jae, unhe titanic bhi hazam nahin hoti

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

aa gye phir baat movie tak

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

Maine bilkul yeh nahi kaha ke aap ne likha hai…
bar aks! hum aap ke mashkoor woh mamnoon hain ke aap ne is shair ko Dhoondha aur hum se is forum mein Share kia aur hum sub ek umda shair se Mehzooz hue…

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Re: MUDAT HUE,SAYAAD NE CHORA BHI TO KIA

haan ab khana hazam huwa :sid: