mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

Azad · April 15, 2003, 7:57am

Yeh ishq na hota to koi our Addu hona tha
Tum mil bhi jatay to koi our khwab hona tha

Zehir ban kar ragoon main meri Woh phail gia
** Azad¬ **mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

Adab Arz

(Azad)

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 8:02am

Re: mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Yeh ishq na hota to koi our Addu hona tha
Tum mil bhi jatay to koi our khwab hona tha

Zehir ban kar ragoon main meri Woh phail gia
** Azad¬ **mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

Adab Arz

(Azad)
[/QUOTE]

Azad jee this is beautiful and let me tell you one thing i dont think you can write anything batter thn this.... and if you did it will be a master piece but this one is the best of all....

Yeh ishq na hota to koi our Addu hona tha
Tum mil bhi jatay to koi our khwab hona tha

Azad · April 15, 2003, 8:21am

Re: Re: mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Azad jee this is beautiful and let me tell you one thing i dont think you can write anything batter thn this.... and if you did it will be a master piece but this one is the best of all....

Yeh ishq na hota to koi our Addu hona tha
Tum mil bhi jatay to koi our khwab hona tha
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Bhai ajab khud garz ho .. iss say ziyada ho jay to itni door say aap ko soym ka chawal bhi naseeb nahi honay walay.

Tera khayal to mehz roz ka bahana tha
Her haal main dard nay dil main samaana tha

Kia milta to jo tujhay donDtay lakeeron main
Azad¬ her haal main aankh nay neer ka bahana tha

yaar dil say yeh dil aaj bohut masti kar raha hay .. i cant really see the screen now, yaar zinda subat baqi.

system · April 15, 2003, 5:18pm

hmmmmm :k::k: achey ashaar hain..

ASA · April 15, 2003, 5:28pm

Re: mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

Yeh ishq na hota to koi our Addu hona tha
Tum mil bhi jatay to koi our khwab hona tha

very nice.... azad saab...

HeArT_HaCKeR · April 15, 2003, 5:28pm

:k: beautiful

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 15, 2003, 6:41pm

excellent job:k::k:lajavab
thanks…

listener-leo · April 15, 2003, 7:22pm

azad mian yeh dil dunya ki intihai naqibil-e-aitbar qisim ki cheez hay, kuch pata nahi chalta...............

chand_chehra · April 15, 2003, 8:51pm

Re: mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

:k:

Azad · April 16, 2003, 8:55am

aap say achay to phir bhi nahi hain na

**CC **- Thanks
listener-leo - Dil hi kia yeh dunia bhi intihaii naqabil e aitebaar hay
ghazal kisi ke - akhair dost kis kay hain
HeArT HaCKeR - par HH wali baat kisi our main kahan
AsSweetAs - Saab

our akhair main phir Sudaii jeee :k:

listener-leo · April 16, 2003, 9:40am

bhai azad yeh dunya dil walo.n hi ki waja say hay warna bay kaif ho jiay sub kuch ( zaroori nahi dil walo.n say muraad DIL WALAY liay jian)

Azad · April 16, 2003, 9:44am

Theek hay jee ...Hamara to dil hi nahi hay ...to phir hum dunia dunia kiyon karain.

bhatka_musafir · April 16, 2003, 10:24am

Re: mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Yeh ishq na hota to koi our Addu hona tha
Tum mil bhi jatay to koi our khwab hona tha

Zehir ban kar ragoon main meri Woh phail gia
** Azad¬ **mout ki sorat nay abhi our haseen hona tha

Adab Arz

(Azad)
[/QUOTE]

master piece azad sahib.

Lamhay · April 16, 2003, 4:07pm

bahut khoob!

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 16, 2003, 9:59pm

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Originally posted by Azad: *
**ghazal kisi ke* - akhair dost kis kay hain ;)

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ab mujhe tumhare persnol baaton ka kia pata:D:p

Azad · April 16, 2003, 10:01pm

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
bahut khoob!
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Nawazish

Azad · April 16, 2003, 10:02pm

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*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

ab mujhe tumhare persnol baaton ka kia pata:D:p
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LOL