motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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khabhi dost kay gehray samande rmein mat utrna
uske teh’y mein bikhray hoay motiyon ko mat samatna
*woh moti tumharay dil mein apnay liyay *
chahat paida kar layein ga
tumharay dil kay andehray samander
mein dolte hoe kishte kay liyay
woh aik kiran ban jayein ga
motiyon ke chamak tum say khargosi karay ge
kahay gee kay dosti
kahtan zindage ko asan bana date hai
band rastay khud-ba-khud kohl dete hai
zindage kay ekala-pan door kar dete hai
koi apna, koi pyara, koi dukh dard ka sathe
is tapte hoe zindage mein saya bana jata hai
per
suno tum uske chamak say door rehna
mein nay kaye baar simatay hain yeh moti
per zindage simat-te nahi, zindage bikhar jate hai
kishte bachti nahi, lehro’n mein doob kay ubahrte hai
rastay kohltay nahi, rastay dono trf say band ho jatay hain
sanatay, wehshat, dard, akelapan aur hum
*sath sath chaltay hain, juda nahi *
jana in moiyon ke chamak arze hote hai .. !!

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

MotiyoN ki chamak yaqeenan arzi hoti hai laikin aksar moti aarzi naheeN hotaY :slight_smile:

very beautiful and nice … ghazal .. wonderful job :cool:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

Very nice..... keep it up it is becomming beautiful...

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

Agreed to Anwar… Ke Moti Arzi naheeN hotay :slight_smile:

Very Nice theme.. and Nice poem as well :k: :flower1:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

buhat khoob poem hay Ghazal, thanks for sharing :slight_smile: and keep writing

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

waqee yeh italian-french moti barray bikar hote hain. laiken Anwar bhai ki baat desi baghair chamak ke bhi moti hi rehte hain.

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

Suno tum uski chamak sey door rehna
Mainey kayi baar simaiTay haiN yeh moti
Par zindagi simaT'ti nahiN, zindagi bikhar jaati hai

Zindagi ko kabhi samaiT'ney ki koshish bhi nahiN karni chahiye... yeh rait ki tarah hoti hai.. hum jitna issey muthi meiN band karney ki koshish kareiN gey, yeh zarra zarra karkey bikharti jaye gi... jab talak hamar haath khaali na ho jaye... :-)

Great poem ghazal... great theme... and words are put in a very nice way... keep writing and hope to see more of you :-)

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

wah Gkk :kiss: zabardast kiya khoob likha hai yaar siso tum nay tu mehfil loot li :slight_smile:

Women Thinks .........
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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

Nice :k:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

WOW…
:k:
good job Ghazalooo :flower1:
i am proud of u :hug:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

GHAZAL ji, this is so beautiful… excellent piece of work…

Bahut khoob… thanks so much 4 sharing :hug:

kya baat hai :slight_smile:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

hmmm nice :)

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

wah… bouhat khoob… kya kehny… GKK… :k:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

wah beautyfull :)

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

Very nice

Bohat umda Masha Allah andaz e tehreer main kafi nikhaar aa raha, keep it up :k:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

v nice gazal keep it up :k:

Rooth na jaana.....
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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

*Anwaar bahii, Golden Scorpion, Azad: **her kese ko suchay moti nahi miltay .. thanx for liking .. *:=) ..

KhamoshNigahein: agar hamaray hath kay nechay kese aur ka hath ho jo girte hoee rait ko ekahta kar lay to rait ekahte ho sakte hai .. thankew for liking n inshAllah will post some more of my work if you guys will encourage me .. *:=) *..

Dilsay, GuL-e-Tasbeeh, HAMMAD, shikra, Shoaib bahii, Lamhay, Sheruuuu, AsSweetAs, ullujii, Wise bahii and koyal thanx a lot guys .. your replies mean a lot to me .. inshAllah i'll improve .. thankew .. :=) ..

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

yes it actually sargoshi .. :-p .. thanx for pointing it out .. :smiley:

khabhi dost kay gehray samande rmein mat utrna
uske teh’y mein bikhray hoay motiyon ko mat samatna
*woh moti tumharay dil mein apnay liyay *
chahat paida kar layein ga
tumharay dil kay andehray samander
mein dolte hoe kishte kay liyay
woh aik kiran ban jayein ga
motiyon ke chamak tum say sargoshi karay ge
kahay gee kay dosti
kahtan zindage ko asan bana date hai
band rastay khud-ba-khud kohl dete hai
zindage kay ekala-pan door kar dete hai
koi apna, koi pyara, koi dukh dard ka sathe
is tapte hoe zindage mein saya bana jata hai
per
suno tum uske chamak say door rehna
mein nay kaye baar simatay hain yeh moti
per zindage simat-te nahi, zindage bikhar jate hai
kishte bachti nahi, lehro’n mein doob kay ubahrte hai
rastay kohltay nahi, rastay dono trf say band ho jatay hain
sanatay, wehshat, dard, akelapan aur hum
*sath sath chaltay hain, juda nahi *
jana in moiyon ke chamak arze hote hai .. !!

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

hmmm nice:flower1:

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Re: motiyon ke chamak arze hai ..

very nice ghazal :k: :hug: