MOSAN ka sallam! aap ke liye,.

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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My sallam to all gupshup members. i am a new member here but hav been reading through your poems 4 the last day or so they are mind blowing. Mera ye chota sa nazrana kabool farmana;

GULSHAN HE KE PHOOLON KI KABAAH MAANG RAHA HE,
GOONCHA HE KE PHIR BAADAE SAABA MAANG RAHA HE,

YOON AAH KE ROOLATI HE MERE DIL KO TERI YAAD,
JESE KOI MAZLOOM DUWAA MAANG RAHA HE,

AESSE TO NA THAE HOOSAN KE BEREHAM TAKAAZAE,
KHUD KAR KE JAFFA HUM SE WAFFA MAANG RAHA HE,

PHIR TARKE TALLUK KA GIRRA BAHAR ANDERA,
ISS SILSILA BIRON MEJAAH MAANG RAHA HE,

QAZI! YE AJAB BAAT HE MASOOM JAHAN ME,
NA KARDA GANAHON KI SAZAA MAANG RAHA HE,

GULSHAN HE KE PHOOLON KI KABAAH MAANG RAHA HE
GOONCHA HE KE PHIR BAADAE SABAH MAANG RAHA HE,

:rotato:

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Wasalam Mosan

aur welcome here!

Nice one thanks 4 sharing !!

Well lolzz to ur signature Fittay munh kyoon???

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shukriya

Your welcome,

:wave:

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nice :)

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welcome MOSAN :wave:
and Fittaymoun tumara :wink:

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:hehe::hehe:

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Me thinks me going to regret puting that on,:smack: fittey moon, fittey moon, fitteyMOON! :smack:

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Nice stuff and ** Welcome Aboard **

Woh baat akelay mein khud se har roz jo mein dohraata thaa
Himmat se janaab-e-janaan ko roka tu sunaana bhool gaya
Jab mein ne kahaa us baat ka kya, jis baat pe jaan yeh atkee hai
Hans kar bola mehboob mera, mein baat barhaana bhool gaya

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thank's

Thanks everyone.
Bohat khoob likha Arif nawaz,saahib. aarz he

TERA GUM RAHE SALLAMATH,MERI ZINDAGI HE JAB TAK,
TERI BERUKHI KE SHIKWE,KABHI LAOON GA NA LAB TAK,
MERI ZINDAGI KE NAGME, JO DEEYE HE TUNE MUJ KO,
ME LAPATHA RAHOON GA MERI JAAN ME JAAN HE JUB TAK,

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Re: thank's

MOSANBahut Khoob and good going !

Dil mein wajh-e-muhabbat, jaan kar kya karoge
Pyar ki is mein shiddat, jaan kar kya karoge
Gar rulaana hai mujh ko, shart hai bewafaee
Mere ashkoon ki qeemat, jaan kar kya karoge

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NICE!

Shukriya bahi saab,

Labn ko to see to liya,teri abaroo ke liye,
hum magar apne ank ke ansoonwon ko chupa na sakae.

toot ke bikar tu jae ga,to ruswa bi ho ga,
appne daman me chupa le,mujko aansoo ki tarah.

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Re: NICE!

**
Yeh soch ke ab chup hon ke ruswaee hogi
Dil ne bhi di hai gawahi ke jag hansaee hogi
**

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:k: :k: :k: bohath khoob! bohath achae,

Dil wohi rehteay he jazbaat badal jatae he,
waqt ke saath khayalaath badal jatae he,

woh jo har eak baath pay detay thay hawala mera,
ab merey zikar pey woh baat badal jatae he.

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Bahut hi khoob !
Keep it up !!!

**
Saath beetay huwe lamhaat bahut yaad aye
Haan woh bikhre huwe zarraaat bahut yaad aaye

Bhoolna chahain tu har baat bhula dain lekin
Yaad aye hai tu har baat bahut yaad aaye

Jin khayaloon se mera jism mehak uth’ta thaa
Woh machalte huwe jazbaat bahut yaad aaye

Tum bhi na bhool sake hoge woh lamhe janaan
Mujhko bhi pehli mulaqaat bahut yaad aaye

Jab bhi shehnaee ki awaaz suni kanoon ne
Woh mere mehndi lagay haath bahut yaad aaye

Jo mera ho ke bhi apna na saka thaa mujhko
Phir ‘Saahil’ wohi halaat bahut yaad aaye
**

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Thanks bahi saab. Aap ke ashiar bohat hi umdaa he:biggthumb

Tareekh ki adat he,badal deti he anken,
kal iss tareekh ne bol dia to,

halaat ka maara hoon,wada nahin karta,
me lote ke aoonga agar waqt milla to. 

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Chupaya tunae jamallo jallal parde me,
jamall doondne wallah kamall mene kiya.

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KISEE KHAMOSH LAMHAY MAIN

Kisee khamosh lamhay main
Kaha jub tum nay mujh se tha
Hamara pyar kya youn he hamain pur josh rakkhega?
Ye jeene marne ki batain
Ye hanstay din ye barsatain
Hamare pyar ki manind Hamesha khul kay barsengi?
Ya wo din bhi tuloo hoga
Jub hum tum sath to hongay
Magar ik be naam sa rishta
Hamare darmiyan hoga

Tumhari aisee baton ko
Mai heraani se sunta tha
Mai kehta tha
Jo hona hay ouse choro
Mere sochon kay raste mai
Wo jo anjaan basti hay
Ousi basti kay kone mai
Hamara chota sa aangan
Apni tamam tar ronaqon ko liye muskurata hay

Magar..
Ab manta hoon main
Tumhari fikar suchi thi
Mai he ghalti pe tha shayad
Na tum pehle si lagti theen
Haan badla mai bhi tha shayad
Magar tum to zamane ki badalti rutt se waqif theen

Tumhari unkahi batain
Mujhe Jub yaad aati hain
To mere dil kay aangan ko
Ghamon se toot ta badal
Hamesha dhaank deta hay
Chalay aao mere humdam
Chalay aao
Kay mere dil kay aangan mai baharon ka basera phir se hojai
Chalay aao
Kay in pur aashob raton ka sawera phir se hojai....

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*Originally posted by MOSAN: *
Thanks bahi saab. Aap ke ashiar bohat hi umdaa he:biggthumb

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Bahut shukriya :)
Waisay zauk aap ka bhi kam nahee hai... ;)
Keep it up :)