moom k phool bananay bethay lakiN dhoop ne aa'N lee'ya

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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* zakhmooN ka do-shaala pahna dhoop ko sar per taan lee'a kia kia hum ne kasht kamaa'ey kahaN kahaN nirvaaN lee'a

naqash dee’ay teri asha’ooN ko akas dee’ay teray sapno ko
lakiN dekh hamari halat ! waqat ne kia taawaaN lee’ya

ashkooN maiN hum ghoondh chukay thay is k lams ki khushbo ko
moom k phool bananay bethay lakiN dhoop ne aa’N lee’ya

barsooN baad hamiN dekha tu pahrooN is ne baat na ki
kuch tu gard-e-safar se bhaa’npa kuch ankhooN se jaaN lee’ya

ankh pe haath dhaaray phirtey they lakiN shahar k logo ne
us ki baataiN cher k hum ko lahjay se pehchaaN lee’ya

suraj suraj khel rahay they sajid hum kal us k sath
aik aik qoas-e-qaza se guzaray aik aik** badal** chaaN lee’ya*

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excellent as always Koyal jee :slight_smile:

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suraj suraj khel rahay they sajid hum kal us k sath
aik aik qoas-e-qaza se guzaray aik aik badal chaaN lee’ya
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kya imagination hai … bahot khoob…:flower1:

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:blush: lakin imagination kis ka ?

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:k: boht achay koyali

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Bohat khoob Koyal Je :)

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Nice1....

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Nice one :k:

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buhoot undaa hai ap ke poem :k:

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:k:

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capri tabieat theek hai na :slight_smile:

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Re: moom k phool bananay bethay lakiN dhoop ne aa’N lee’ya

Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing:)

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excellent:k::k:
thanx!

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thanks Hh..:slight_smile:

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tanks Wg...badal.swera,...gKk capri..:)

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Re: Re: moom k phool bananay bethay lakiN dhoop ne aa’N lee’ya

:blush: