Mohsin Har Ek Satr Haya Ki Lakeer Thi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Zamil August 3, 2006, 1:38am 1

GHAZAL

Chaahat ka rang tha na wafa ki lakeer thi
Qaatil k haath mein to hina ki lakeer thi

Khush hoon k waqt-e-qatl mera rang surkh tha
Mere laboN pe harf-e-dua ki lakeer thi

Main kaarvaaN ki raah samajhta raha jise
Sehra ki reit par wo hawa ki lakeer thi

Sooraj ko jisne shab k andheron mein gum kia
Mauj-e-shafaq na thi wo qaza ki lakeer thi

Guzra hai shab ko dasht se shaayad wo parda-daar
Har naqsh-e-pa k saath rida ki lakeer thi

Kal uska khat mila k saheefa wafa ka tha
Mohsin har ek satr haya ki lakeer thi

darwesh August 3, 2006, 2:57am 2

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Jigar Zamil...Khushbash,

Kiya Dil Pe Lakeer Khainch dali yaar....Maza Aagaya.... Bohat Umda.

Darwesh.

Isra_Chaudhary August 3, 2006, 5:41am 3

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nice sharing

mahamkhan August 3, 2006, 8:58am 4

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very nice!

Prince_Ali August 3, 2006, 11:44am 5

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Very nice :k:

Zamil August 4, 2006, 12:55am 6

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darwesh g !
Isra Chaudhary g !
mahamkhan g !
Prince Ali g !
Bohat Bohat SHUKRIA G ! :)

rabia_rana August 4, 2006, 9:29pm 7

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waahhhhhhhhhh..........jaan lainay ka irada lay kr atay ho dost

sad_affect August 5, 2006, 6:24pm 8

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Buhat zabardast yaar

How do you think they look?

reet August 6, 2006, 10:02am 9

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bahot khoobb......thnx for sharing......!

HeArT_HaCKeR August 6, 2006, 10:15am 10

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Nice one.

goodnews August 6, 2006, 6:43pm 11

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Lajwab Intikhab Zalim,:k:
Chaahat ka rang tha na wafa ki lakeer thi
Qaatil k haath mein to hina ki lakeer thi
Yhan tak tu puhnchy yhan tak tu ay warna mazi main tu masl arha hy ky
Tmam sheyhr ny phen yhoy hain dastany
Main kis ky hath pr apna lahoo tlash kron

Zamil August 6, 2006, 6:56pm 12

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Na g,
Jaan kya lein ge ham...
Wo bhi doston ki... :)

Zamil August 6, 2006, 6:59pm 13

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Bohat shukria yaar :)

Zamil August 6, 2006, 7:03pm 14

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Barri nawazish...
Meri taraf se bhi pasand karne ka shukria...! :)

Zamil August 6, 2006, 7:04pm 15

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Thanx HH... :)

Zamil August 6, 2006, 7:07pm 16

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**Bohat shukria… **
**Waise, she’r sunaane ka koi bahana jaane na dijiye ga… **

I am Back after 6 months Ban! a changed Guppy for sure!