-- Mohlat --

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 3, 2008, 6:51am

Mohlat

**Ab k waQt ki mohlat **
khatm honey waali hey
khawaab ke sabhi Taai’r
aankh ke dareechey sey
gir k marney waaley heiN
sabz aas beloN ke…
paat jhaRney waaley heiN
zindagi ke maathey par
zard paRtey hontoN sey
saans aakhri bossa
dey ke jaaney waali hey
kuch hi pal tou baaQi heiN
ab k waQt kii mohlat…
khatm honey waali hey
kon shakhs aaya hey
khaawaab haath meiN thaamey
ye yaQeeN dilaaney ko
k agar meiN ruk jaaouN
gar zara si mohlat ho
Zakhm silney waaley heiN
Phool khilney waaley heiN
ussko kaesey samjhaaouN
uss ney deir kar di hey
kuch hi pal tou baaQi heiN
kuch hi pal tou baaqi they…
ab ke waqt ki mohlat…

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 3, 2008, 7:11am

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i hate poetry :femme:

aabla_pa · July 3, 2008, 7:33am

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its very traggic. :(

S.786 · July 3, 2008, 8:24am

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but niiiice

Ali_2 · July 3, 2008, 8:57am

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again the same theme

but poetry is nice :k:

system · July 7, 2008, 11:50am

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Why do I feel these words mean more to you than just poetry that needs appreciation... :-)

Naz'm bohat khoobsurat hai.. Shayari mein tragedy na ho to sahi tarah sey mazza nahiN aata :-)

redidentity · July 7, 2008, 12:22pm

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buhat umda..

muncho · July 7, 2008, 2:15pm

sawal ye hey k insaan gham-pasand kiyun hota hey?

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 7, 2008, 2:38pm

sawal ye he ke u ne ye sawal keo aska ?

_dArd · July 7, 2008, 3:26pm

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Umda Sharing
.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.

SunnyBoy · July 7, 2008, 3:51pm

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nice :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · July 7, 2008, 5:13pm

excuse me

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 7, 2008, 8:26pm

Thats right, kisi ko tou kuch samajh aaya :~)

Shumaisa · July 8, 2008, 7:46am

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V. Nice sharing Gul.. :k:

Precious_Khan · July 9, 2008, 3:52pm

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Buhat Khoob Gul :~)

abeeha · July 9, 2008, 5:36pm

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GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTT

EEMAAN · July 10, 2008, 8:29pm

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Ufffffffffffffffffff,,,bohat udaas per bohatttttttttt khubsurat..

bheegiyaad · July 10, 2008, 10:53pm

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waqt ki mohlatt…wah wah :k:

ASA · July 11, 2008, 6:35am

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nice.. :k:

Dushwari · July 11, 2008, 6:43am

Gul-e-tasbeeh,

except here for poetry, one's expression of felt sad or happy thoughts are allowed, lekin aisa nahi kheteye.

be strong and have the faith that you are bestowed with, with a sure idea that your protagonist's loved ones are loking forward to the protagonist's prosperous and fruitious existence, which is a blessing to you as well. :>