Koi wada nahi hum mein
na apas mein bhuhat baatein
na milne mein bhuhat shokhi
na akhar shaab mana jatein
magar ik un kahii sii hai
jo hum dono jante hain
ye saray dilrab manzaar
talismi chandni raatein
sunairi doop ke mousam
keh halke sukh ki barsatein
sabhi ik zid mein rehtein hain
mujhe peehum yeh kehtein hain
MOHABBAT YOUN NAHI ACHI!!!
MOHABBAT YOUN NAHI ACHI!!!
nice diction 
and very well written:flower1:
Thanxs kaffi jaldi mein reply deya 2 mint mein :D
welcome.. just read it and i liked it so replied
if u want i wont reply next time 
AQ yaar kaisi baatein kartein hain mein asal mein hiraan ho gaya tha ke abhi post ki aur reply be agaya is leye lekha yaar aesi koi baat nahi mere bhai:)
achaa:p yeh scho yaar kay kitni zabar10 cheez likhi aap nay kay ALLAH miyaaN nay appreciate karaanay kay liye mujhay bilkul uss waqt bhej diyaa jub aap nay post kiyaa :roman:
very nice
poem is excellent :k: I love it :love: but did u write it urself?
Posted by Ratan on 10-09-2003 10:50 AM
koi wada nahi hum men
na aapas men buhat batain
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and press Ctrl+F, in find input box type “koi wada nahi hum men”
or search the same on google.
I mean no offence but you have posted it under your own poetry, you will have to explain it my dear.
khoob
hmmmmmmmmmmm
^^hmmmmmmmmm
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AQ bhai yeh tu aap ne theek kaha :) wel said
Thanxs cutepie :k:
Thanxs chodhry nahi dost yeh meine khud nahi lekhi aur mujhe ye be nahi pata kiss ne lekhi hai mujhe achi laggi aur meine share kar li aap ke saath:)
Thanxs Azad :p
Thanxs Suraj And Swera jii:)
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Thanxs chodhry nahi dost yeh meine khud nahi lekhi aur mujhe ye be nahi pata kiss ne lekhi hai mujhe achi laggi aur meine share kar li aap ke saath:)
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ok thts alright, but next time plz post other's poems in intikhab forum.
thank u manan...plz give credit where its due in the future :)
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