Mohabbat tark kee main ne

ehsan · April 5, 2007, 5:01pm

Mohabbat tark kee main ne garebaan see liyaa main ney
zamaane ab to Khush ho zahar ye bhi pee liyaa main ney

abhi zindaa huun lekin sochata rahata huun khalvat mein
ki ab tak kis tamanaa ke sahaare jee liyaa main ne

**unhein apnaa nahin sakata magar itana bhi kyaa kam hai **
keh kuchh muddat haseen khaabon mein kho kar jee liyaa mein ney

**bas ab to daaman-e-dil chhor doh bekaar ummeedo **
**bahut dukh sah liye mein ne bahut din jee liyaa mein ney **

danial · April 5, 2007, 5:05pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

ehsan:

Mohabbat tark kee main ne garebaan see liyaa main ney
zamaane ab to Khush ho zahar ye bhi pee liyaa main ney

** abhi zindaa huun lekin sochata rahata huun khalvat mein
ki ab tak kis tamanaa ke sahaare jee liyaa main ne **
 unhein apnaa nahin sakata magar itana bhi kyaa kam hai 
keh kuchh muddat haseen khaabon mein kho kar jee liyaa mein ney

bas ab to daaman-e-dil chhor doh bekaar ummeedo
bahut dukh sah liye mein ne bahut din jee liyaa mein ney** **

:k:

AQ · April 5, 2007, 5:20pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

:)

fghd · April 5, 2007, 6:10pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

abhi tou mainey kuch kaha hi nahee

chacha_Ghalib · April 5, 2007, 6:16pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

^ :aq:

IS · April 6, 2007, 2:15am

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

kuch keh k to daikhooo

Ehsan bahi very nice :k:

ashi2007 · April 6, 2007, 5:10pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

yeh kya kia app ne
ps very nice

sharmili_sharmin · April 6, 2007, 6:41pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

mere tau ansoo nikal aay itna dukh hai es poetry main

Prince_Ali · April 6, 2007, 6:53pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

buhut khub Ehsan bhai :k: :k:

babri · April 6, 2007, 7:02pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

very nice.

Minerva · April 7, 2007, 10:50pm

Re: Mohabbat tark kee main ne

shair ka naam naheen likha?