Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

Mjhe Ye Ghalat Fehmi Thi

K Mohabbat Dhair Sari Thi

Dono Haatho Main Bhar Ker

Tamam Umar Sambhalun Ga

Kabhi Khoney Nahi Doon Ga

Mohabbat Khoney k Darr Se

Muthiyan Beench Li Main Ne

Magar Jab Muthiyan Kholiin

Tou Dono Haath Khali Thay

Kyun k

Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

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Awesome.

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

bilkul issi khayal pe maine apni zindagi ki pehli nazm likhi thi.. idea chori ho gaya

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

Report nahi likhwai ap nay phir

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very nice :k:

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

nahi.. who cares

Zara share Karen :hmmm:

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

shaam main

Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

Theek hai.

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

Nice. :k:

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exact wording main bhool gaya hoon.. its not saved in my diary… it was something like that:

kaise bataen ke wo shakhs kaisa hai
shayad wo rait jaisa hai
jisse muthi main dabae to hathon se phisal jae
jo khole rakhen hath to sang hawa ke uR jae :bummer:

:hmmm:

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

us waqt aap ki umar kya thi?

Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

^good question.

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

uss waqt bhi aatish jawan tha.. ab bhi main jawan hoon.. aaj se 10 saal pehle ki hai. I was in my teenage

Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

Ab likhen koi poetry mojuda umer ki.

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

ab nahin likha jata.. kabhi kabhar ek aadh shair likh leta hoon to share kar deta hoon yahan GS pe

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

shuroo se hi yehi halaat hain

Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

:hmmm:

Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi

we want baqaida shairy