Fizza4u
December 18, 2012, 11:48am
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Mjhe Ye Ghalat Fehmi Thi
K Mohabbat Dhair Sari Thi
Dono Haatho Main Bhar Ker
Tamam Umar Sambhalun Ga
Kabhi Khoney Nahi Doon Ga
Mohabbat Khoney k Darr Se
Muthiyan Beench Li Main Ne
Magar Jab Muthiyan Kholiin
Tou Dono Haath Khali Thay
Kyun k
Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Diva
December 18, 2012, 2:25pm
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Awesome.
Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
bilkul issi khayal pe maine apni zindagi ki pehli nazm likhi thi.. idea chori ho gaya
TlGER
December 18, 2012, 11:59pm
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
bilkul issi khayal pe maine apni zindagi ki pehli nazm likhi thi.. idea chori ho gaya
Report nahi likhwai ap nay phir
TlGER
December 18, 2012, 11:59pm
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
very nice :k:
Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Report nahi likhwai ap nay phir
nahi.. who cares
Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Kinzz:
Zara share Karen
shaam main
ehsan
December 19, 2012, 7:44am
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Nice. :k:
Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Kinzz:
Theek hai.
exact wording main bhool gaya hoon.. its not saved in my diary… it was something like that:
kaise bataen ke wo shakhs kaisa hai
shayad wo rait jaisa hai
jisse muthi main dabae to hathon se phisal jae
jo khole rakhen hath to sang hawa ke uR jae
tarash
December 19, 2012, 5:36pm
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
muqawwee123:
exact wording main bhool gaya hoon.. its not saved in my diary… it was something like that:
kaise bataen ke wo shakhs kaisa hai
shayad wo rait jaisa hai
jisse muthi main dabae to hathon se phisal jae
jo khole rakhen hath to sang hawa ke uR jae
us waqt aap ki umar kya thi?
Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
us waqt aap ki umar kya thi?
uss waqt bhi aatish jawan tha.. ab bhi main jawan hoon.. aaj se 10 saal pehle ki hai. I was in my teenage
Kinzz
December 19, 2012, 5:41pm
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Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
Ab likhen koi poetry mojuda umer ki.
Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
ab nahin likha jata.. kabhi kabhar ek aadh shair likh leta hoon to share kar deta hoon yahan GS pe
tarash
December 19, 2012, 5:43pm
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
uss waqt bhi aatish jawan tha.. ab bhi main jawan hoon.. aaj se 10 saal pehle ki hai. I was in my teenage
shuroo se hi yehi halaat hain
tarash
December 19, 2012, 5:44pm
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Re: Mohabbat Rait Jesi Thi
ab nahin likha jata.. kabhi kabhar ek aadh shair likh leta hoon to share kar deta hoon yahan GS pe
we want baqaida shairy