mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaaee main
jaisay ja chuppa suraj oonchay paharon main

jo kuch bhi usnay kiya kuch gila nahin kiya, lakin
gila karnay hum baithain hain ruswaaee main

jo koee aurat ab aati hai meri nazron main
chera tumara dekhta hoon us k burkay main

sochta hoon kaisay kahoon tum se mohabbat karta hoon
tumari yaad main ghazlain likhta hoon raat ki tanhaee main

tu nahin kabhi samjhati meray dil ki tarpan
mera dil tarpata hai khoob teri yaadon main

kya de chukki hai kisi langoor ko tu apna dil, Anaar
langoor bhaag jaatay hain angoor khatam honay main

- Anaar
http://www.pakmehfil.com/viewtopic.php?p=69641#69641

Appreciation of the poem :

The poet says the lover is missing his beloved in loneliness and he has been thinking of her in the passing of the evening that glided away as the setting of sun beyond the high hills. Note the metaphor here - setting of love as setting of the sun. The sun, however, does not complain what it does for all of us. But the lover makes complaints in his loneliness and tells his beloved she never understands how much he desires her. She’s always on his mind. He lives in a culture where women hide themselves in their burkas-veils, and whenever he sees any women, he thinks it is her, his mehbooba. He does not know how to express his mohabbat for her directly, lest he be beaten up by her father/uncles/brothers; and so he writes to her ghazals full of mohabbat, every night. He gets vicarious pleasure of mohabbat doing so. He’s afraid she might have fallen in love with some other man. He becomes jealous and calls him a langoor, an animal that loves angoor - grapes, and makes her aware of the fact the her new lover might not be real. After he eats up all grapes - after he is full of her sweet love- he will leave her.

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kya de chukki hai kisi langoor ko tu apna dil, Anaar
langoor bhaag jaatay hain angoor khatam honay main

wat is this????????
who is Anaar????
Ye Shair kahan paay jatay hain????

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

Please read the appreciation of the poem given as a footnote.

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

burkay ka kia kaam hai yahan :cb::cb:

bara hi koi nazerbaz banda hai :CareBear:

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

Rqeeb-e-janan ki baat ho rahee hai Sheal…:hehe:

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

lakin wo her oorat ko goorta kuen hai wo bhi burqay waliyoon ko :cb:

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

Aray ghorta iss liay hai kay kuch nazar aay…:omg:

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

:omg::omg:

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*** kya de chukki hai kisi langoor ko tu apna dil, Anaar***
langoor bhaag jaatay hain angoor khatam honay main

Ye shair tu shair ki zehniyat ki sahee tarjumani kar raha hai Sheal.......:D

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

jee jee sonia bilkul her shair hi lajawab hai. apni misal ap hai .:D:D:D

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

han samajh nahin aa raha Anaar ko daad kaisay dun Iss Ghazaab ki shairee par:omg:

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:nono::halo:

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

The honour-stones wrapped in silken cloth. This is the worst thing we can do to our fellow beings here.

As for the poem, it only depicts the ghaTiya punn of the copy cat.

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^ agree

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

what the hell is this :-/ please do us a favor stops sharing this nonsense with us

Re: mohabbat ki shaam doob gayi tanhaeee main

:salam:
sab ki apni apni apni samajh.

For those who lack appreciation of Urdu poetry,
a note of appreciation was appended to the poem