Mohabbat ki rasmeiN

Amal · January 3, 2003, 5:29pm

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MeiN jaaney laga to roney lagi wo
meiN laot ke aaya to phir ro parri wo
pehley khoney pe rona, phir paaney pe rona
meiN ney poocha in ashqoN ka matlab hey kya!
:love:haNs ke boli tumhaarey safar ka ik chotta sa sadqa

In maasoom jazboN ko deikha to jaana
mohabbat ki rasmeiN bhi kitni haseeN heiN!!!

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(am confused, does it make sense?)

Dilsay · January 3, 2003, 5:34pm

Beautiful.... Amal jee... That is great....

Baas asay he yaad aya...

Agar chup chap tum dekhoo to dam aram say niklay
Idahar hum hichki latay hain udhar tum roonay lagtay hoo...

nikii · January 3, 2003, 5:44pm

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wowwwwwwwww
amal ji zaberdasttt
bhut hi khoubourt choice ha words ki :k:
thxs 4 sharing

chand_chehra · January 3, 2003, 6:48pm

Re: Mohabbat ki rasmeiN

woww amal very nice :k: and yes it does ap nahi samjho gay

Amal · January 3, 2003, 7:50pm

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kuch kuch to samajhta hooN isi leeye to aesi nazm likhi na … bas wesey hi thorra sa double-minded tha…anyhow, thanx a lot for liking it:flower1:

Thanx nikii and Dilsay

Wrangler · January 3, 2003, 7:59pm

nice...love got more devotions beyond our imaginations...as much we go as much deep is this

Sajalina · January 3, 2003, 9:26pm

Amal
bohat khoob.

Dilsay
That was a beautiful sher.

arifnawaz1 · January 3, 2003, 10:14pm

:k::k::k:

Eastern_Thoughts · January 3, 2003, 10:18pm

Very nice Amal :k:

ayk aysi poem i had with me, long time baack got it from somewhere…

Mohabtain Rullati hain

Haan Mohabtoon ki ajeeb rasmain hain
Khabhi khoonay Khabhi paanay pay rootay hain
muger Jana
luboon pay hunsi bhi tu mohabut hay
Mohabtain Rulaati hain
Bahut dair lurai rahi khud say
hameeshan ki turha
khuch boolay bina
Ankhoon main numi leay, door bahut door nikal aaye
her baar dhuli ankhoon say
Manzil ko daykhtay hain
Such hay
Mohabtain Rullati hain

aadhoorighazal · January 3, 2003, 11:32pm

No Amal, it does not make sense, and that is ONE valid reason its so beautiful, so awfully awesome, is damagh kae khalul main aqul ka kya kam?? mukamal deevangee hai, mukamal intoxication.......
jo samaje sakoo tu aansoo, na samaje sako tu pani...

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 3, 2003, 11:45pm

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nice :k::k:

_Passionate · January 4, 2003, 12:03am

WOW…amal ji bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai…:k:

and abt making senese…seriously first it dint n all of a sudden when it did make sensee…yes i was speechless!..

nia_khan · January 4, 2003, 2:19am

aur aksar hum na chahatey howy bhi yeh rasmeein nibhaatey hain :~)

doent matter insaan kuan sey culture yah religion sey ho.. yeh ek ehsaas sab ko ek jesa kar deta hai :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 4, 2003, 8:05am

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:love: boht khob :love:

_Janu_Jia · January 4, 2003, 10:39am

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aww the first one is just :k: and the second one is also kool

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 4, 2003, 6:36pm

hmmm buhat Sweet sii hay :~)
Thanks for sharing Amal jii:)

Amal · January 4, 2003, 8:09pm

Thanx a lot guys :) ... I am glad my shot did not miss :) ... confusion is clear :)

Nazam · January 4, 2003, 8:41pm

keya kamal key shayar hein app beautiful poetry

NikamiJano · January 4, 2003, 9:36pm

Really:rolleyes:

kab se…

NikamiJano · January 4, 2003, 9:39pm

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v nice Aymal…haiN? ap c c c confuse kab se honay lagay…confuse honay ki habit mut banaiey…gup shup ki tareekh gawah hai k ap wonderful poet..than why confuse…