Mohabbat ki rasmeiN

Amal · September 11, 2007, 7:45pm

Mohabbat ki rasmeiN

**MeiN jaaney laga to roney lagi wo meiN laot ke aaya to phir ro parri wo pehley jaaney pe roi — phir aaney pe roi pehley khoney pe roi — phir paaney pe roi meiN ney poocha in ashqoN ka matlab hey kya! haNs ke boli, tumhaarey safar ka ik chotta sa sadqa in maasoom jazboN ko deikha to jaana mohabbat ki rasmeiN bhi kitni haseeN heiN!!!**

By: Amal

AQ · September 11, 2007, 7:50pm

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very well expressed :)

being_lonely · September 11, 2007, 8:47pm

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PyaarI NaZam hai Amal Bhai keep writting n sharing:bb:

NikamiJano · September 12, 2007, 4:00am

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nice one Amal u know am not nazam person per us k ronay pe payar a gaya :)

deep_ocean · September 12, 2007, 4:49am

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very nice **Amal **:k:

Omar_Faraz · September 12, 2007, 5:05am

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The Ways of Love

I was going to leave,
she began crying.
When I returned,
she cried still.

First on my leaving
then on my returning.
First on losing me
then on having me.

I asked what **
**did tears mean?
"Little offerings for your
journey," she said smiling.

Seeing the innocent
jestures of passion,
I realised how beautiful
are the ways of love.

redidentity · September 12, 2007, 5:21am

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Buhat Khoob Amal Jee :)

Prince_Ali · September 12, 2007, 9:41am

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zabardast, well written Amal bhai! :k: :k:

SJ · September 12, 2007, 9:48am

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Masoom say jazbaat ka mazhar...............Masoom see nazam...........simply Amazing....beautifully expressed feelingz.......
bohat khoob Amal.............:)

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 12, 2007, 2:43pm

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me se ziada masoom nehe ho sekte

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 12, 2007, 3:17pm

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ap bhe translator heyn :D

SJ · September 12, 2007, 3:33pm

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han tum say zayaada Masoom nahin hai…
aur ye baat sirf mein jantee hon…

mirage · September 12, 2007, 3:45pm

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Sweetness of expression is prevalent. A pleasant piece of poetry indeed.

Omar_Faraz · September 12, 2007, 3:49pm

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jee haan, hain
phiR (fir) say!

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 13, 2007, 7:31am

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Kuch rad-o-badal k baad doobara share karney ka shukriya, parh k buhat acha laga:-)

Amal · September 13, 2007, 5:56pm

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^ Hmmm … lagta hey aap ney ratta maar rakha hey

Omar_Faraz · September 14, 2007, 2:42am

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Amal Bhai Sahib,

You are a fair person and I have high regards for you. Could you please be kind enough to let me know as to why I am being denied access to GS poetry? I always agreed to your recommendations/suggestions and advice. Are you feeling pressure from other members who do not want me here? I have no desire to contribute poetry here if I am not welcome. I was given no warning/explanation and was denied access. Today I am able to log on and think because it is due to the mess up of GS data base.

PS: Perhaps it is not the right place to post this message to you but I would like other respected/honest/fair members of the poetry forums to know this, irrespective of what they think of it.

Kind regards
Omar Faraz

Prince_Ali · September 14, 2007, 5:47am

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http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=263533

Kind regards
Prince Ali

:@:

Sheal · September 14, 2007, 11:23am

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bohot khoobsorat ilfaz main feelings explain ki hain ap nay jo zaban say nahi sirf ansoon say kahi jati hain. amazing :)

Shab-e-Hijar · September 14, 2007, 12:55pm

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very well expressed

Ps

ye rasmain sirf larkiya hi nibhah sakti hain