Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

My Own :@:

Mohabbat ki nahin jaati, mohabbat ho hi jaati hay,
Tabeeyyat piyar main kisi ke aakay, kho hi j aati hay,

Mohabbat ko kisi ke aaitaraaf ki nahin chahat,
Mohabbat ko nahin parwa, mohabbat ko nahin hasrat,

faqat yehi samajhti hay ke mujhko piyaar kerna hay,
Mohabbat main mujhay aagay qadam har baar kerna hay,

Mohabbat maangti nahin, Mohabbat deti hay hardam,
Kabhi hissay main paaye sukh, kabhi chaarsu hon gham,

Magar phir bhi mohabbat is qadar mazboot hoti hay,
Churao laakh tum daman, magar atoot hoti hay,

Maira bhi dil hay piyar se itna bhara hoa,
Magar wo shakhs hay aisa, ke samandar ruka hua,

Khuda aik mauj aisee day ke samadar bhi yun chalay,
khari saahil p ---- ko bhi apnay sang le chalay!!!

---- main maira takhalluss hay :@:

Adaab Adaab :@:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

good :lajawab:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

aadaab aadaab! :@:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

Nice one. takallus kiyun chupaya?

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

maira naam hay :@:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

Nice poetry, lekin naam koh kiya chupana?

BTW I will be around your pind over the weekend.

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

:cb: aray naam main kiya rakhaa hay…aap shairi ki depth main jaayen :cb:
Reading turned to be Pind? :bummer: when?? :konfused:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

Toh phir chupana kiyun?

Reading will always be a pind when compared to Birmingham. :smiley:
Have you been to Birmingham?

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

Nice!

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

:nahi:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

thanks :@:

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

I feel inspired to write a poem myself but I don't think my urdu is that good yet :D

Re: Mohabbat Ho Hi Jaati Hy!!

aw…you need skills, not urdu, go ahead, we are ready to hear your english poetry :khumar: