Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

Ahmi · December 26, 2008, 10:36am

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Regards,

Ahmi

_Masoom_Muskaan · December 26, 2008, 3:53pm

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

sehe logo se kerte pehr ese na kehte

Ahmi · December 27, 2008, 12:46pm

Yeh sahi log kon say hotay hain?

person_with_no_name · January 26, 2009, 8:00am

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

bohot khoob likha aap ne... laikin.. kisi ko ghair iraadi tor pe sar-e-barazaar hoti hay???? yahan wazen nai mehsoos ho raha...bura lagey to mazarat. bas jo kami mehsoos hoi bata di.

Ahmi · January 26, 2009, 8:59am

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

Thankyou janab for appreciation and telling me your point of view thanks i am not regular poet bus kabi kabar likhta hun.

person_with_no_name · January 26, 2009, 9:29am

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

merey khayaal main jo dil ki baat khoobsoorti se keh de wohi shair hay... her koi Iqbaal, ghalib ,faiz, faraz honey se to raha... hay na?

Ahmi · January 26, 2009, 9:52am

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

han g but as I am not student of Urdu language so mujhe nahi pata wazan, radif, kafiya waghera yeh tus bus dil ki baat hai

person_with_no_name · January 26, 2009, 10:04am

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

wazan,radeef,kafiya... lo aap ne likh to diya pata kaisey nai? or urdu ka student na hotey hoy bhi aap ne atna acha to likha...

Ahmi · January 26, 2009, 10:14am

:) Nawazish..

being_lonely · February 5, 2009, 12:37pm

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

Wahan Inkaar Hoti Hai Kya Kehne Bohat simple n khoobsurat Andaaz e bayaan Hai Ahmi Keep It Up :k:

Ahmi · February 5, 2009, 3:02pm

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

Thanks Moderator sb..

shani · February 5, 2009, 3:08pm

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

jaha bhi dil lagaata hai waha inkaar hoti hai...

O jeeo Ahmi ji...chaa gay ho..

Ahmi · February 6, 2009, 3:24am

Re: Mohabat kar key daikha hai..

Bari Meharbani janab.