Mohabat III

muddii · April 16, 2008, 5:23am

Muhabat Aag Key Soorat
Bhujhay Seenoun Main Julti Hai Tu Dil Baydaar Hootay Hai
Muhabat Key Tapish Main Kuch Ajab Asraar Hootay Hain
Keh Jitna Yeh Bharaktii Hai, Aroos-e-Jaan Mahektii Hai
Dilloun Kay Sahiloun Purr Jama Hooti Oor Bhikartii Hai
Muhabat Jhaag Key Soorat
Mohabat Aag Key Soorat

Dushwari · April 16, 2008, 5:26am

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muddi,
why muhabbet is in increments or sequels? interesting concept :)
goods lines.

best,
Dushwari

Shab-e-Hijar · April 16, 2008, 5:40am

Re: Mohabat III

jhaag ki tarha gaieb hokar.. phir insaan ko jala daiti hai :D

muddii · April 16, 2008, 6:08am

Re: Mohabat III

Well the whole poem has some six stanza and thought, as for myself, it is difficult to keep the reader interested in such a long post I decided to post in sequels:)

P.S Thanks for liking:)

muddii · April 16, 2008, 6:12am

Re: Mohabat III

Na Nah..................Jhaag on the surfs key tarh ikathii hooti hai phir bhikar jaati hai and then recollectes again.........so on a continuous process:)

Daanie · April 16, 2008, 6:16am

Re: Mohabat III

nice sharing :)

muddii · April 16, 2008, 6:19am

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Thank u:)

Koyal · April 18, 2008, 3:57am

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nice 1 muddi g ap k ghar ja k shikaiat karna parey ghi k yahan tu 3 3 mohabtaiN chal rehi :p

muddii · April 18, 2008, 5:11am

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hahahahahahaha..............:)

P.S: Thanks for liking:)

bheegiyaad · April 18, 2008, 12:34pm

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very nice

muddii · April 18, 2008, 1:12pm

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Thank u:)

Precious_Khan · April 18, 2008, 1:15pm

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Nice :k:

muddii · April 18, 2008, 2:37pm

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Thank u PK:)

S.786 · April 18, 2008, 7:04pm

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ye nazam kuch din pehly menay post ki thi

muddii · April 21, 2008, 5:13am

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