Aliyish
September 29, 2007, 7:10am
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***Jaab Raat kay is phich.lay phayhaar tum ***
***Baadaan ki taaal pay shaab baahr humaray ***
***Aajb eek khawissh , waqt is dil meein mayray ***
***Mereee Jaaan waqqt kaay is bhaytay samnay mein ***
***Tuj ko paya kay , is duniya mein ***
wooh tayray Aaaksh ka ek Saya hai !!!
( Aliyish)
I dont know , if it is too bold for your liking ! Bas khabi wajaad or shadmaani kee darme’Yani haalaat mein liki howi Kuch lines AP ki nazar !
Baak raha hoon Junnon mein kia kia kUch
Minerva
September 29, 2007, 7:14am
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Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
rozay main bhi eisi amad hoti hai :p al amaan al hafeez!
Aliyish
September 29, 2007, 7:32am
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Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
rozay main bhi eisi amad hoti hai :p al amaan al hafeez!
Kuch arrsay Phalay lik'ee thee ,ek Jagah save thee tu wahan say yahan move kardi !
Ammad tu Janay kaysii kaysii howe hain . Matey ! woh tu hum Hamayshah lik kay page pahar dia kartay hain !
Ab Manto shaab ki tarha humhain court kachayree karnay ka shoq nahi hai in chezion kay publish honay pay !
fizatiq
September 29, 2007, 12:00pm
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Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
**Jaab Raat kay is phich.lay phayhaar tum * *
**Kissi khillthee kaali say phool bannkar * *
**Mohaabaat ki zubaan mein bhool banker * *
**Mayree bahahoon mein simm.tii parii hoo * *
**Baadaan ki taaal pay shaab baahr humaray * *
**Junnon kay wastay , daryaaa kinnaaraay * *
**Humaray daikaay , saab khawboon shaaahray * *
**Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai * *
**Aajb eek khawissh , waqt is dil meein mayray * *
**Ek arzoo gungutaahee phir rahee hai * *
**Meiin chahtah hoon tujhay baydaar karkay * *
**Tayaray maahtaay pay phir jhhoomaary sajoon * *
**Tujhay phir say mein ek dhulaan bana.oon * *
**Husun ki chandani phir say naha.oooon * *
**Mereee Jaaan waqqt kaay is bhaytay samnay mein * *
**mujhay , yea khaanay mein kohii aarr naheee * *
**Aj is dil kaa Mujpay kohi udddhar naahiii * *
**Tuj ko paya kay , is duniya mein * *
**zeeest nay mayree joh bee paya haai * *
**wooh tayray Aaaksh ka ek Saya hai * *
wooh tayray Aaaksh ka ek Saya hai !!!!
( Aliyish)
I dont know , if it is too bold for your liking ! Bas khabi wajaad or shadmaani kee darme'Yani haalaat mein liki howi Kuch lines AP ki nazar !
Baak raha hoon Junnon mein kia kia kUch
kuch na samjay Khuda karay Kohi
buhat khoob likhtee hain aliyish.............very nice....................page nahi parha karain ham say share kar leya karain.................
Ali_2
September 30, 2007, 4:17pm
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Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
kafi azaadana amad hoti hai kabhi kabhi aap per :p
lagta hai manto ki rooh halool hone ki koshish kar rahi hai :)
AQ
September 30, 2007, 6:39pm
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Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
rozay main bhi eisi amad hoti hai :p al amaan al hafeez!
Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
very nice..
meri bhi aik romantic si nazm hai but main na ramzan ke end honay ka wait ker raha hoon.. mujhe laga tha k mujhebhi aise comment miltay
Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
**Tak'ye'ay pay teray sar ka nishan ab bee para hai
naz'deek say kuch bee tuh dika'ee nahee daytah
(Gulzar)
Azad
November 26, 2007, 11:29am
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Re: Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
khoob :k:
