~mian har chooot kay baad sabalna chata hoon ~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

IS June 22, 2005, 7:19pm 1

mian har chooot kay baad sabalna chata hoon
mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon

nahi karta intazar waqat! kesi ka
mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon

**lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay **
**mien un lamhoon ko qaid karna chata hoon **

**jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam **
**logoo mien ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon **

**muj say jitna be ho Naraz wo aay dil **
mein usay hameesha khush deakhna chata hoon

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 23, 2005, 6:13am 2

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Very nice… Mashallah

IS June 23, 2005, 9:09am 3

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Thanks GS bahi

cutesponge June 26, 2005, 7:33pm 4

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wow amaizing is bhai

IS June 26, 2005, 9:03pm 5

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^^ sukriya moto

SC rules in favor of Sharif brothers (merged)

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Koyal June 27, 2005, 1:53am 6

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nice one smiley keep it up :)

IS June 27, 2005, 8:20am 7

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^^ Thans Sister

shoaib_akhter June 27, 2005, 1:38pm 8

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wah bohat nice :k:

IS June 27, 2005, 10:52pm 9

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^^ tHANKS SHOBI BAHI

-- Germany ...

harf-e-junoon July 5, 2005, 8:14am 10

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chehra mera tha nigaahain us ki
khaamoshi main bhi woh baatain us ki

meray chehray pur ghazal likhti gai
sher kehti hui aankhain us ki

neend in khiaal say tooti uksur
kaisay kut ti hoongi raatain us ki
parveen shakir

Barbie_Girl July 5, 2005, 8:26am 11

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Tu nay dekhi hain wo ankhain, wo hont wo rukhsar
zindagi jin ke tassawur mai luta di hum nay

IS July 5, 2005, 6:56pm 12

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just wanted to tell you...

being_lonely October 26, 2007, 10:39am 13

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Bohat Bohat Khoobsurat Likha Hai Aap Ne
Thumbs up for immu bhai :k:

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SJ October 26, 2007, 10:43am 14

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Awesome............
mujhay pata he nahin tha app bhi Shairr hain....
Great Job Brother:)

Frozen_Oxygen October 26, 2007, 10:59am 15

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good job...ek zakhm khoorda dil keh jazbaat ka sahi naqsha khencha hai..

jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam
logoo mien ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon

Is sheir keh jawab mein eik sheir yaad aata hai..

Gulshan ki Faqat phoolon sey naheen kaanton sey bhi zeenat hoti hai
Jeenay keh liyeh is duniya mein ghum ki bhi zaroorat hoti hai

SJ October 26, 2007, 11:00am 16

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hmm…Ghum na he Ho tou Acha hai…

Frozen_Oxygen October 26, 2007, 11:04am 17

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ji..

tum naheen ghum naheen sharab naheen
aaisi tanhai ka bhi jawab naheen

_Masoom_Muskaan October 26, 2007, 2:24pm 18

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2 sal old poem he

Frozen_Oxygen October 26, 2007, 2:41pm 19

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achaa didnt know..jagjit ney gai hai I know..

I like the part where he says

Jaanay kis kis ki maut aai hai
aaj rukh pur koi naqaab naheen..

perfect shair for flirting...:D)

**~ Cafe's Valentine's day Post4Date competition: for the girls ~**

_Masoom_Muskaan October 26, 2007, 2:43pm 20

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bhae flirting seht ke lie mozer he:(

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