..mgr tumhien kia ?!?!

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 3, 2005, 6:16pm

mae aaray tarchay khiyaal sochuN k bey-irada kitaab likhoN koii shanasa ghazal tarashoN
k ajnabii intisaab likhoN
gunwa dun ik umer k zamanay
k ik pal ka hisaab likhoN
taveel-tarr hai safaR tumhien kia
mae jee raha hoon mgr tumhien kia
mgr tumhien kia k tum tu kub se
mere iraday gunwa chalay ho ..
jala k saray haroof apne
merii duaeiN bhuja chuke ho
mae raat oorho`N k subh pehnoN
tum tu apnii rasmien utha chuke ho
suna k sub kuch bhula chuke ho
tu ab mere dil pe jabR kaisa
ye dil tu hadd se guzaR chuka haii
guzaR chuka haii mgr tumhe kia
khizaN ka mosum thehR chuka haii
thehR chuka haii mgr tumhe kia
mgr tumhe kia k is khizaaN mien
mae jis tarah k bhii khwaab likhon . ..

**~Mohsin naQvii~ **
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Amal · August 3, 2005, 6:20pm

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Beautiful HeArT HaCKeR:k:, bohat khoobsoorat nazm hey. Thanx for sharing

Dragon_King · August 3, 2005, 7:21pm

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Shabssh Aunty HH :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 3, 2005, 8:00pm

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thx for likin Amal and Dragon uncle ..

Dragon_King · August 3, 2005, 8:20pm

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^ U R WelKom

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 4, 2005, 3:54am

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beautiful!

nakhan · August 4, 2005, 4:58am

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intresting Nazam, well done

umer.ashraf · August 4, 2005, 5:11am

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Kia baat hai ji.

Wajha-e-begangi Nahin Maloom
Tum jahan k ho waan ke hum bhi heiN

Golden_Scorpion_1 · August 4, 2005, 6:06am

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WOW… Its Wonderful… Mohsin Naqvi sure is Gr8

Tnx For Sharing Sweety

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 4, 2005, 10:13am

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thanks everyone!

chand_chehra · August 4, 2005, 7:32pm

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mgr tumhe kia k is khizaaN mien
mae jis tarah k bhii khwaab likhon . ..

bohat khoob :)

show_sha · August 4, 2005, 9:17pm

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very nice!

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 5, 2005, 9:38am

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thanks chandu and show-sha

Koyal · August 7, 2005, 2:58am

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nice one heartu

khilat · August 7, 2005, 3:28pm

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bohat khoob

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 7, 2005, 6:10pm

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thx for likin koyal nd khilat :)

system · August 7, 2005, 8:55pm

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Mager tumheiN kya key is khizaaN meiN
MaiN jis tarah key bhi khwaab likhooN...

That's such a lovely naz'm HH... Thank you for sharing :-)

Aceones · August 13, 2005, 5:56pm

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bohot umda… :k:

ImranQ · August 16, 2005, 10:23am

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buhat achay!! thax for sharing this touchy Broken heart stuff :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 16, 2005, 9:50pm

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thanks for liking KN, aceones nd Imran :)