S.786
March 30, 2008, 9:12am
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meri omanggu…zara sa thheru…,
khushi mujhy chhuor kar chali hy. bahaar rasta badal rahi hy
sukon k lamhy sisak rahy hen..,dilon men khandar otar rahy hen
ghamon sy kehdu k muskuraaen..
meri omangu abhi na jaao…
abhi tu pehli kharaash aai hy,wo bhi ehsas ki zubaan par
abhi tu aany hen gham hazaron,rooh par dil py jismu jaan par
abhi tu bas ibtedaa hoi hy…
abhi sy tum chhur kar na jao,
hijar ki raaten draaz tar hen,wisal ki subhen kahan talashon?
kissy dikhaaon kharaash dil ki?
meri omanggo zara suno tuu..
wo jis ki chahat men jag ko chhora, wohi andhery bakhash gaya hy
akela pan karabnaak sa hy , shab e pashemaan dass rahi hay…
meri omanggo abhi na jaao..
meri omanggo chali bhi aao..!
Re: MERY QALAM SY…
bohat achi nazm hai… rawaan aur anokhi istlahaat say pur :k:
S.786
April 1, 2008, 1:20pm
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Re: MERY QALAM SY....
thanks..........chacha..........abhi toti photi shairi karti hon...,aapka co op raha tu qalam men tezi aaigi.......:)
wesy is nazam ko raqam karty waqt meri aankhen bheeg gain thin....bye
Ali_2
April 2, 2008, 2:57pm
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Re: MERY QALAM SY…
buhat khoob :k:
kafi rawani hai nazam main
S.786
April 2, 2008, 5:28pm
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Re: MERY QALAM SY....
buhut shukria.........dostu......:)
Re: MERY QALAM SY....
v nice sonia :) keep it up :)
S.786
April 10, 2008, 12:38pm
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Re: MERY QALAM SY....
thanks.........n.j......who is soniyan?
Re: MERY QALAM SY…
very nice .. keep it up girl