jo utar ke ziinaa-e-shaam se terii chashm-e-Khush me.n samaa gaye
vahii jalate bujhate se mahar-o-maah mere baam-o-dar ko sajaa gaye
ye ajiib khel hai ishq kaa mai.n ne aap dekhaa ye mojezaa
vo jo lafz mere gumaa.N me.n the vo terii zubaa.N par aa gaye
vo jo giit tum ne sunaa nahii.n merii umr bhar kaa riyaaz thaa
mere dard kii thii daastaa.N jise tum ha.Nsii me.n u.Daa gaye
vo charaaG-e-jaa.N kabhii jis kii lau na kisii havaa se niguu.N hu_ii
terii bevafaa_ii ke vaasavaa use chupake chupake bujhaa gaye
vo thaa chaa.Nd shaam-e-visaal kaa ke thaa ruup tere jamaal kaa
merii ruuh se merii aa.Nkh tak kisii raushanii me.n nahaa gaye
ye jo bandagaan-e-niyaaz hai ye tamaam hai vo lash_karii
jinhe.n zindagii ne aman na dii to tere huzuur me.n aa gaye
terii beruKhii ke dayaar me.n mai.n havaa ke saath havaa huaa
tere aa_iine kii talaash me.n mere Khvaab cheharaa ga.Nvaa gaye
tere vaasavaao.n ke fishar me.n teraa sharar-e-rang uja.D gayaa
merii Khvaahisho.n ke Gubaar me.n mere maah-o-saal-e-vafaa gaye
vo ajiib phuul se lafz the tere ho.nTh jin se mahak uThe
mere dasht-e-Khvaab me.n duur tak ko_ii baaG jaise lagaa gaye
merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
tere paas jitane javaab the terii ik nigaah me.n aa gaye
Amjad Islam Amjad
SJ
August 4, 2007, 11:32am
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Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
ye ajiib khel hai ishq kaa mai.n ne aap dekhaa ye mojezaa
vo jo lafz mere gumaa.N me.n the vo terii zubaa.N par aa gaye
vo jo giit tum ne sunaa nahii.n merii umr bhar kaa riyaaz thaa
mere dard kii thii daastaa.N jise tum ha.Nsii me.n u.Daa gaye
merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
tere paas jitane javaab the terii ik nigaah me.n aa gaye
kya baat hai BB...................wonderful ghazal.......
har shair apni misaal app hai...Awesome!
:)
Sheal
August 4, 2007, 12:37pm
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Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
very beautiful. thanks for sharing Bholay Bisray jee :)
Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
one of ma fav thanks 4 sharin :) BB
Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
that is one heck of a winner ghazal
Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
jo utar ke ziinaa-e-shaam se terii chashm-e-Khush me.n samaa gaye
vahii jalate bujhate se mahar-o-maah mere baam-o-dar ko sajaa gaye
ye ajiib khel hai ishq kaa mai.n ne aap dekhaa ye mojezaa
vo jo lafz mere gumaa.N me.n the vo terii zubaa.N par aa gaye
vo jo giit tum ne sunaa nahii.n merii umr bhar kaa riyaaz thaa
mere dard kii thii daastaa.N jise tum ha.Nsii me.n u.Daa gaye
vo charaaG-e-jaa.N kabhii jis kii lau na kisii havaa se niguu.N hu_ii
terii bevafaa_ii ke vaasavaa use chupake chupake bujhaa gaye
vo thaa chaa.Nd shaam-e-visaal kaa ke thaa ruup tere jamaal kaa
merii ruuh se merii aa.Nkh tak kisii raushanii me.n nahaa gaye
ye jo bandagaan-e-niyaaz hai ye tamaam hai vo lash_karii
jinhe.n zindagii ne aman na dii to tere huzuur me.n aa gaye
terii beruKhii ke dayaar me.n mai.n havaa ke saath havaa huaa
tere aa_iine kii talaash me.n mere Khvaab cheharaa ga.Nvaa gaye
tere vaasavaao.n ke fishar me.n teraa sharar-e-rang uja.D gayaa
merii Khvaahisho.n ke Gubaar me.n mere maah-o-saal-e-vafaa gaye
vo ajiib phuul se lafz the tere ho.nTh jin se mahak uThe
mere dasht-e-Khvaab me.n duur tak ko_ii baaG jaise lagaa gaye
merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
tere paas jitane javaab the terii ik nigaah me.n aa gaye
Amjad Islam Amjad
i cud read this a hundred times and still be touched by it :)
Amal
August 11, 2007, 12:43pm
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Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
Always a treat to read it. Simper superb :k: Thanx Amjad bhai for sharing it with us
Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
wah :k:
thanx for sharin
Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
Bohat Khoob :k:
Re: merii umr se na simaT sake mere dil me.n itane savaal the
achi gazal hai bholy :)