meri zindgi to simat chali mujhe ab fareb-e-baqaa na de!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

bholibisri October 24, 2007, 10:13pm 1

rag-o-jaan main dard samaa chukaa mere chara-jaan davaa na de!
meri zindgi to simat chali mujhe ab fareb-e-baqaa na de!!

yu agar hai malik-e-bakht- o-jaan mere maula meri ye baat rakh
Iss kajj-adaaee ke daur mein mujhe haque-ravi ki sazaa na de

ka’ee aafaton se bachaa liyaa ka’ee andhioN se chupaa liya
ye chirag phir b chirag hai koi ek jhonkaa bujhaa na de

ye hai ahl-e-hashma- ke anjuman yahaN haque-nava’on ka kaam kya!
wo ‘sufi-faqir’ ko dekhnaa koi raaste se hataa na de!!

Starlight October 24, 2007, 10:19pm 2

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not bad not bad very nice!

Shab-e-Hijar October 24, 2007, 10:23pm 3

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bohat khooob :k:

deadsoul October 24, 2007, 10:32pm 4

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very nice

NikamiJano October 24, 2007, 10:58pm 5

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nice sharing bholi :)

redidentity October 25, 2007, 5:39am 6

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WoW..

bholibisri October 26, 2007, 12:18am 7

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:)

bholibisri October 26, 2007, 12:20am 8

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:)

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

bholibisri October 26, 2007, 12:21am 9

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thanks

Last person to answer this post wins!!!!

bholibisri October 26, 2007, 12:22am 10

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:)

Last person to answer this post wins!!!!

_Masoom_Muskaan October 27, 2007, 9:11am 11

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v nice bholi g :)

Ali_2 October 27, 2007, 10:04am 12

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nice sharing NikamiJano ji :k:

Bholay_Bisray October 27, 2007, 10:12am 13

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^ :D

bholibisri October 27, 2007, 1:26pm 14

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Ali naam shaam dekh lea karo shukria btw main bholi not** Nikami**

bholibisri October 27, 2007, 1:41pm 15

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:desimunda:main bholi hoon tusi kahay ko dant niqal rahya :halo:

Ali_2 October 27, 2007, 1:58pm 16

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:D iss tarah ki ghazlain aksar Nikami Ji share karti hain na :snooty;

►◄ Congrats Little Princess ►◄

bheegiyaad October 27, 2007, 3:53pm 17

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nice bholi :)

bholibisri October 27, 2007, 6:52pm 18

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tu kia huwa aik wohi hia jo kar sakti koi aur nahi kar sakta :halo:

bholibisri October 27, 2007, 6:52pm 19

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shukria ji :)

Bholay_Bisray October 28, 2007, 3:13am 20

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NO , Hamari MOD jaysa bunany ki koshiich na kurain bholibisri , aap better hay khuch post na kiya kurain you know khabhi ayk nick say login khabhi doosray say, kaam bahut ziayda nahi ho jaata?