meri zeest ka hai hasil
wo mata e jaan hai meri
hoa dil pe mere jo naqsh
ik aks dilruba sa!
hon kashmakash main kese
kahon tum se haal apna…
tum lafzon ka ho samandar
main ik lafz ka payasa
hai ye lafzon ka khail sara!
tu hai jab se door mujh se
rag o jaan main utar rahi hai
ik teergi si jaisy…
har shama bujh rahi hai
rah e zindagi ki jaisy
hoa zindagi main jaisy
ye ajeeb saniha sa!
na khayal hai kisi ka
na hi khud aagahi!
main umeed kho raha hon
mujy tu hi de dilasa…
Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
Aik Ghazal…
kabbhi lafz nai milttay, kabbhi baat nai milti
hon mehkay khawab jis main wo raat nai milti
sath chalny walon ko kion tu yun chor jata hai
ke tere hijar main unhay unhi ki zaat nai milti
kia kahon tum se Jaana! tujh se juda honay ke bad
hum ko apnay hi aks main, apni shanakht nai milti
tum ko apna keh paain, khud ko karain munslik tum se
humain haath ki lakeeron main, bas yehi baat nai milti
Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
achi nazm aur ghazal share ki hai..mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye
Amal
April 13, 2011, 8:22pm
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Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
aek hi thread mein do post ka kya faeda? Aek nazm aur aek ghazal… Give your readers space to appreciat you, don’t confuse them … and I hope it was the last time
Sannan
April 14, 2011, 6:11am
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Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
nice jee
Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
bohat alaa inno.
Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
meri zeest ka hai hasil
wo mata e jaan hai meri
hoa dil pe mere jo naqsh
ik aks dilruba sa!
hon kashmakash main kese
kahon tum se haal apna…
tum lafzon ka ho samandar
main ik lafz ka payasa
hai ye lafzon ka khail sara!
tu hai jab se door mujh se
rag o jaan main utar rahi hai
ik teergi si jaisy…
har shama bujh rahi hai
rah e zindagi ki jaisy
hoa zindagi main jaisy
ye ajeeb saniha sa!
na khayal hai kisi ka
na hi khud aagahi!
main umeed kho raha hon
mujy tu hi de dilasa…
too good … !!
this for u …
kaash tu
mera saath deta kuch din aor ,
mai bhi
rooswai se buch jata kuch din aor.
dayar-e-husn
kia jaany ulfat ki giran keemat,
muft bazar-e-ishq
mai bik jata kuch din aor…!!
Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
great 1’s…!
Re: Meri zeest ka hai hasil…
Aik Ghazal…
kabbhi lafz nai milttay, kabbhi baat nai milti
hon mehkay khawab jis main wo raat nai milti
sath chalny walon ko kion tu yun chor jata hai
ke tere hijar main unhay unhi ki zaat nai milti
kia kahon tum se Jaana! tujh se juda honay ke bad
hum ko apnay hi aks main, apni shanakht nai milti
tum ko apna keh paain, khud ko karain munslik tum se
humain haath ki lakeeron main, bas yehi baat nai milti
bht achi hai …
jaane kiya hua ussay aaj,
chala aaya woh mere koochay, mera deedar krne,
raab jane, kiya tha us k dil mai,
chala aaya khud ko ruswa krne, ya mjhe barbaad krne
kitne saloon say tha intizar mjhe,
chala aaya sab chor kr, apni mubhat ka izhar krne,
itne saloon say jo ker nah saka yakeen
chala aaya aaj, meri mubhat per aitbaar krne
kehta tha nafrat krta hai mjhe say,
phir kyu …!!
chala aaya aaj woh, mera qatal-e-aam krne… ****samii **