Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Yehi samandar jo saahilon ki
haddon ke andar
ubal rahay hain
kabhi agar in ki teh mai jhaanko to

moj-e-saakin,
saraab-e-raqs-o-sur-o-naghma

yahaan se le kar wahaan talak bas sakoot-e-tanha

koi bhi shikva-rasaa nahi hai

afsurda chehron,
udaas aankhon ki dastaanain

gali gali mai
khmoshiyoon ko jaga rahi hain

meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani
meri udaasi kahaan nahi hai!!!**

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Re: Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani...

Nice one. Per samandar ki teh main kaise jhanka jata hai?

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Re: Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani…

yeh lafz kia hai? suroor o naGhma yaa surood-e-naGhma yaa phir sur o naGhma?

sur o naGhma to nahiiN ho saktaa kiuN k shaa’irii meN qaanoon-e-izaafat kii roo se jaa’iz nahiiN…chuN k izaafat sirf aur sirf Faarsii aur Arabii alfaaz ke maa-bai’n hii ho saktii hai…chuN k lafz-e-‘SUR’ Hindi kaa lafz hai is liye iskii izaafat jaa’iz na hogii.

nazar-e-saanii kar len plz. ho saktaa hai kitaabat kii Ghalatii ho!

vaise, kis shaa’ir kaa hai yeh kalaam…shaa’ir kaa naam bhii kuchh vazaaHat kar saktaa hai…:cb:

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Re: Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani...

Bro thori bohat news py bhi nazar rakha kryn,
2/3 din pehly hi dikhaya tha "Pani ka Dron"
Price 4000 dollar.....

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Re: Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani…

**meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani
meri udaasi kahaan nahi hai!!!

:lajawab:
**

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whats that ?

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Re: Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani...

Pani ka Dron tayara

samandar ki teh main jhaankny k liya

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Submarine?

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nhi

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ok :(

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http://cdn.slashgear.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/hydroview-580x360.jpg
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Re: Meri udaasi hay bay-zubaani…

doesnt look v friendly:no:

thanks for the pic :smiley: