Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bichar kr tujh se zinda hoon meri taqdeer tou dekho**
**Kabhi aa kr mere halaat ki tasveer tou dekho

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Mujhe mehfil mein dekha tou kaha us ne raqeboon se
**Mera aashiq, mera paagal, mera dargeer tou dekho

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Teri tasveer ke peeche hain jaalay bewafayi ke
**Ullat kar tum zara apni, kabhi tasveer tou dekho

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De kr pyar ki daulat khareeday khoon ke aansu
**Milli jo ishq mein, zara jageer tou dekho

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Likha hai naam saahil ka shararat hai raqeboon ki
Yeh khat mera nahi janaan, zara tehreer tou dekho

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Re: Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

'umda Ghazal kii sharaakat ke liye aapkaa shukria. go k kulliyatan Ghazal ke saare ash'aar hii pasand aaye magar juszvii taur par nisbatan yeh she'r dil ko ziyaada bhaa gayaa:

Likha hai naam saahil ka shararat hai raqeboon ki
**Yeh khat mera nahi janaan, zara tehreer tou dekho**

shaa'ir kii tazmeen karte huye meraa ek fil badeeh she'r mulaaHizah farmaaiye: :)
**
taHreer kia, taqreer kia, tafseer kia
tum zaraa alfaaz ki taaseer to dekho!**

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Re: Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

Nice. :k:

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Re: Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

Bohat khoob

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Re: Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

:hat:

Tou ap sha’er hain :hmmm:

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Re: Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

maiN shaa'ir to nahiiN magar ai Pee Ke TUN!
jab bhii paRhii shaa'irii mujhko shaa'irii aa gaii! :D

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Re: Meri Taqdeer Tou Dekho

:k: