meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

[Koyal]

maiN gazal kahoN maiN gazal parhoN mujhy day tu husan-e-khayal day
tera gham he hai meri tarbe’at mujhay day tu ranj-o-malal day

sabhi chaar din ki hia chandni ye imar’taiN ye vezar’taiN
mujhay is fakir ki shaan day k zamana jis ki misaal day

meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se
teray dar ko choor k ja’ooN gha ye khayal dil se niqal day

meray saa’mnay jo pahaa’r they sabi sar jhuka k chaly ga’ey
jisay chaa’hay tu arooj day jisay chaa’hay tu zawal day

baray shooq se inhi pathroon ko shikam se baandh k so rahoon
mujhay maal-e-mufat haram hai mujhay day tu rizaq-e-halal day

[Dushwari]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

mukarer, Koyal.
thanks for sharing.
Dushwari

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

beautiful :)

[redidentity]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

Beautiful..

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@Koyal

maiN gazal kahoN maiN gazal parhoN mujhy day tu husan-e-khayal day tera gham he hai meri tarbe'at mujhay day tu ranj-o-malal day sabhi chaar din ki hia chandni ye imar'taiN ye vezar'taiN mujhay is fakir ki shaan day k zamana jis ki misaal day meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se teray dar ko choor k ja'ooN gha ye khayal dil se niqal day meray saa'mnay jo pahaa'r they sabi sar jhuka k chaly ga'ey jisay chaa'hay tu arooj day jisay chaa'hay tu zawal day baray shooq se inhi pathroon ko shikam se baandh k so rahoon mujhay maal-e-mufat haram hai mujhay day tu rizaq-e-halal day

kya baat hey Koyal bibi, aap ney iss type ki poem first time share ki hey:~)

[deep_ocean]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

very nice :k:

[Amal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

Another lovely piece Koyal :k: …kahaaN sey dhooNd laati ho aap aesi khoobsoorat tehreereiN

[WiseGuy]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

bohat khoob :k:

[tum_bin_1]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

zabardast

[Prince_Ali]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

very nice :k:

[being_lonely]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

kya kehne birdy jee khush rahiye

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@Dushwari

mukarer, Koyal.
thanks for sharing.
Dushwari

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@being_lonely

kya kehne birdy jee khush rahiye

shukria lonley

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@Prince_Ali

very nice :k:

thanks PA

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@Amal

Another lovely piece Koyal :k: …kahaaN sey dhooNd laati ho aap aesi khoobsoorat tehreereiN

thanks Amal khubsurat tahreerain koyal dhondhti rah jati aur star ap ko mil jatey

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@Shab-e-Hijar

beautiful

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

kya baat hey Koyal bibi, aap ney iss type ki poem first time share ki hey:~)

thanks gul-e-tasbeh ap kafi arsay baad aien hain na kafi post ki hain agay b :)
ab ap kesi ho :)

[Koyal]

Re: meri subha teray salam se meri shaam hai teray naam se

@redidentity

Beautiful..

thanks red :)

aur baqion ka thanks kal :)