meRi soochooN ka mehvaR tum nahi ho

NikamiJano · September 1, 2006, 9:21pm

***meri pasand jantey ho*** ***meri kamzori se waqif ho*** ***is leay surakh gulaab ki adh kali beshumaar kalyaaN*** ***meary sarhanay chor jatey ho*** ***meri wahshtooN ko samjtey ho*** ***is leay doobtey suraj aur*** ***udaas shamooN ko canvas pe utar laatey ho*** ***meri tanhaa'eooN se waqif ho*** ***is leay har saal meri salgeera pe*** ***suraj ki pahli kiran k sath*** ***salgeera mubarak kahnay pohnch jatey ho*** magar tum ye nahi jantey k *meri pasand, meri kamzorioN, meri udasiooN* *aur tanhaa'eooN se waqif honay k bawajood be!* *meri soochooN ka **mehvaR **tum nahi ho*

ullujii · September 3, 2006, 1:53am

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simply awesome :)

NikamiJano · September 3, 2006, 2:05am

Re: meRi soochooN ka mehvaR tum nahi ho

uluji ini jaldi jawab

ullujii · September 3, 2006, 2:10am

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vo keya hai na.. keh ider Din hone walla hai. to din co ullu sotay hain..to phir bat kal raat per chali jati…aur kal kis ne dekha hai

Amal · September 3, 2006, 11:14am

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Bohat haseen andaaz-e-bayaan hey aur haalaat ki hobat umda manzar-kashi :k: NikamiJi, chaa gai heiN aap

Bholay_Bisray · September 3, 2006, 11:34am

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Khoobsourt choice :)
aur see itni mehnat ho raahi, to make more attractive..... wasay yeh kis ki hay, Parveen Shakir ki?

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 3, 2006, 11:49am

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Boht khoob!!!

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 3:44am

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kal "hmmmmm kisi Koyal ne dekha ho gha

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 3:45am

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i guess ye parvwwn shakir ki nahi hia.....agar un ki hoti tu shiaed ye hota k :tum he mehvaR ho: lagta hia nishi gailani ki hia peR am not sure bout :)

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 3:46am

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aRay ap ko ab pata chala NIkami ko tu chaa’ey huwey zamna ho gaya

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 3:46am

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thanks heartU

Sannan · September 4, 2006, 3:59am

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kia shuroaa't aur kia ikhtamama ....simply awesome ...... nice sharing

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 4, 2006, 7:38am

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:) nice

Prince_Ali · September 4, 2006, 9:14am

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very nice :k:

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 6:47pm

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thanks :)

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 6:47pm

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:halo:

NikamiJano · September 4, 2006, 6:48pm

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thanks:)

Muslim_girl_1 · September 4, 2006, 6:51pm

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beautiful…:k:

Capricorn · September 4, 2006, 6:53pm

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Be-dardi kee intiha kar dee tum ne

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 5, 2006, 8:34am

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I think pehlay Koyal nay post ki thi :~) well nice poem last line kaafi safaak haiN, Zulm ki had hay Nikami Ji:p thanks for sharing:-)