Meri sansain teri amanatain....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Humaira_Noor November 7, 2014, 10:12am 1

***Mere HUMSAFAR teri nazar hain

Mere jazba-e-dil ki shidatain
Meri dhadkanain meri chahatain
Mere khawab meri basaratain
Jo tere qadam mere gher chalain
Mere sath shams o qamar chalain
Teri qurbatain main sameet lon
Rah-e-zindagi ki musafatain
Tere naam se meri subho ho
Teri yaad se meri shaam ho
Tere ro baro hain surkhru
Mere chashm o dil ki ibaratain
Mere roz-o-shab kay nasab main
Tere pass apna to khuch nahi
Tera qarz hai meri zindagi
Meri sansain teri amanatain…!!***

muqawwee123 November 7, 2014, 10:34am 2

Re: Meri sansain teri amanatain…

Tera qarz hai meri zindagi?

Interest rate??

Howzat_1 November 9, 2014, 5:17am 3

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This version is cool

But Aitbar Sajid’s ghazal is simply awesome and is my all time fav

Humaira_Noor November 13, 2014, 7:00am 4

Re: Meri sansain teri amanatain…

sorry! samjhi nai

Humaira_Noor November 13, 2014, 7:01am 5

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waoooooooooooow no doubt koooooool

muqawwee123 November 13, 2014, 7:05am 6

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qarz per sharah e sood poocha tha

Humaira_Noor November 13, 2014, 7:08am 7

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Princess_Kiara November 14, 2014, 5:26am 8

Re: Meri sansain teri amanatain....

Humaira_Noor:

Mere HUMSAFAR teri nazar hain Mere jazba-e-dil ki shidatain Meri dhadkanain meri chahatain Mere khawab meri basaratain Jo tere qadam mere gher chalain Mere sath shams o qamar chalain Teri qurbatain main sameet lon Rah-e-zindagi ki musafatain Tere naam se meri subho ho Teri yaad se meri shaam ho Tere ro baro hain surkhru Mere chashm o dil ki ibaratain Mere roz-o-shab kay nasab main Tere pass apna to khuch nahi Tera qarz hai meri zindagi Meri sansain teri amanatain...!!

nycccccccccc :) and thankoo shoo muchhhhhhhhhhh :P