meri sabz rutooN ki jheel meiN teri zaat he ik phool thei

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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meri sabz rutooN ki jheel maiN
teri zaat he ik phool thei
gul aa’b thei ik shabab thei
meri khawaishoN ki ameen thei
meiN ne daaN ki sabhi hasrataiN
ye hijar nahi azaab hai
jo janam janam pe mo’heet hai ye safar nahi talash hai
meri ulfatoN ko bhula dee’ya meri nafratoon ka hisaab hai
meray ruutjaghooN ki waja ho tum
meray rutjaghooN ka hisaab do
meri chaahatoN ki chandni
bina chaand k udaas hai
meri baat ko na yuuN tool do
meri chahatoN ka jawab do
maiN ne zindghi tay’aag de
meri zindghi ka hisaab do

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hisaab aata houta tu yahan houta .. !!!

PS: very nice .. :k:

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Fikar not kamran miyan, inki apni hisaab ki kitab gum hay, warna to yahan hoti :smiley:

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Bohat Khoob Koyal Jee :)

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zabar10 :k:…

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bahot achchi hai Koyal jee :D

jee haan aap bhi and poem bhi :p

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Re: meri sabz rutooN ki jheel meiN teri zaat he ik phool thei

Very nice… :flower1:

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Nice :)

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tu kahan hotey phir..:snooty:

PS: WHO? :stuck_out_tongue:

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hmmm tu ap hain chor..me aisay idher udher dhoondh rahi wohi baat huiw baghal main katora shahar main dhindhoora..:hoonh:

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thanks :blush:

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thanks khamosh..dost ..Hh...and wise...:)

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Re: meri sabz rutooN ki jheel meiN teri zaat he ik phool thei

very nice :k:

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Re: Re: meri sabz rutooN ki jheel meiN teri zaat he ik phool thei

v thanks g..:slight_smile:

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baqol e Ghalib kitab ki chori, chori nahi hoti … katora to humain mila nahi warna peenay ke kaam to aa hi jata …

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acha huwa nahi mila wesay be koyal k thread main asiay kaam:nono4:

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nice1:k:

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Beautiful

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Dair o haram main chain jo milta
Kyon jatay may’khanay log

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:snooty: