meri rah rehnay dou khar khaar kay meray liye to yehi bahar hai

Shab-e-Hijar · June 17, 2008, 11:53pm

teray tabsray hain bekhabar meri dastan-e-hayaat say tu keh raha hai dil jisay meri khawahishoo'n ka mizaar hai
tera shukria aye tabbeb-e-jaan, ye khaloos apni jaga magar
teri masehaye bhi kya karay mera dard hi beshumar hai

meray rastoo’n jo agya meray kafiloo’n ko jo kha gya
woh toofa’n to kub ka guzar gya magar dil mai ab tak gubaar hai

aye mehrbaa’n dost sun meri mushkiloo’n ko samjh kay mai
teri mohabatoo’n ka kya karo kisay dil pay ab ikhtyaar hai!

naye mousamoo’n ko bulaoo mut kay mujhay khushbu’aon ki talab nahi
meri rah rehnay dou khar khaar kay meray liye to yehi bahar hai

jo nafratoo’n say julas gya usay dil say saray dua’ain dou
par us sitam zada ka kya karay jo muhabatoo’n ka shikaar hai!

Aryaan · June 18, 2008, 12:41am

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naye mousamoo’n ko bulaoo mut kay mujhay khushbu’aon ki talab nahi
meri rah rehnay dou khar khaar kay meray liye to yehi bahar hai***

Bohat khoob Shab-e-Hijar..:k:

SunnyBoy · June 18, 2008, 2:56am

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nice :k:`d

Ali_jee · June 18, 2008, 6:06am

Re: meri rah rehnay dou khar khaar kay meray liye to yehi bahar hai

tera shukria aye tabbeb-e-jaan, ye khaloos apni jaga magar
teri masehaye bhi kya karay mera dard hi beshumar hai
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**katna dard lagta hi dil e aawaz main **
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umar guzar gaye tere gham e hayaat main aye dost
**tu bhi tarp raha kase tanha jangal ki tarhan **
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**new sharing ka intezar rhega **
app ka fan Ali

muncho · June 18, 2008, 11:42am

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jo nafratoo'n say julas gya usay dil say saray dua'ain dou
par us sitam zada ka kya karay jo muhabatoo'n ka shikaar hai!

itee afsurda-ful shaeri oh ho...
Elan e murg hua tu us ne bhi keh diya mohsin
Acha hua mar gaya, aksar udas rahta thaa

redidentity · June 18, 2008, 11:54am

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very beautiful..

bheegiyaad · June 18, 2008, 12:00pm

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wah.. its beautiful :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · June 18, 2008, 1:08pm

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aj kel bere poetry post rehe ho onkee

Shumaisa · June 18, 2008, 2:35pm

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wahh Bohat zabardasstt

Sheal · June 18, 2008, 5:44pm

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awesome sharing :k:

Sheal · June 18, 2008, 5:49pm

onkee kin ki …:aq:

Shab-e-Hijar · June 18, 2008, 5:57pm

onkee konkee :aq:

Shab-e-Hijar · June 18, 2008, 6:11pm

to kya udaas rahnay walo ko marjana chaiye?

Shab-e-Hijar · June 18, 2008, 6:13pm

awww

S.786 · June 18, 2008, 7:26pm

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buhut khoob hamesha ki tarha

muncho · June 18, 2008, 7:30pm

lo hor suno! mutbul ye k mustakil udaasi=lifelessness

Shab-e-Hijar · June 18, 2008, 7:43pm

mane socha ap kahry udasi say acha hai marjao :D

muncho · June 18, 2008, 7:50pm

waisay bhee koi khaas faraq nahi mohabt main jeenay aur marnay ka (bqol e shair)