meri poetry...

punjabi_kuri · January 18, 2003, 7:11pm

yesterday night,i was just sitting…n i just picked up my pen,and wrote some thing…

rotay rotay hans diyay hum
tum aayey bhula diyay ghum
honton pay muskurahat
aankhain hain phir bhi nam
yeh tumhara kamal hay
ya duniya kay diyay huay zakham…

Azad · January 18, 2003, 7:44pm

Mashallah :k: :k:

punjabi_kuri · January 18, 2003, 8:04pm

thanx.

also thanx to ppl who pm’d me to say this was good…these ppl dont post on gs anymore…but still browse it,thanx alot:)

Dilsay · January 18, 2003, 8:08pm

Acha hai.... keep it up and please do shair it with us....

thanks

Azad · January 18, 2003, 8:09pm

Arfinawaz whould have liked it as well ....... where is Arif btw???

punjabi_kuri · January 18, 2003, 8:19pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
Arfinawaz whould have liked it as well ....... where is Arif btw???
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he pm'd me sayin he thought it was good,it meant alot coming from him as his taste in poetry is really good:)

Dilsay thanx:)

Azad · January 18, 2003, 8:37pm

humm strange ... PM karnay say post karna ziyada assan hay .. khair Arif jee ki marzi hum kia keh saktay hain

punjabi_kuri · January 18, 2003, 8:43pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
humm strange ... PM karnay say post karna ziyada assan hay .. khair Arif jee ki marzi hum kia keh saktay hain
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maybe hes stopped postin..

Azad · January 18, 2003, 9:02pm

yeah may be i wonder why

Dilsay · January 18, 2003, 9:05pm

Yes we wonder…

chand_chehra · January 18, 2003, 9:27pm

:k:
keep it up

BrokenSky · January 18, 2003, 10:17pm

Nice 1:k:
keep up the good work

akpower · January 18, 2003, 10:23pm

Wah, good stuff! Kya dard hai shairee mein!

:k: :k: :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · January 19, 2003, 1:26am

wah ji wah bhut hi khoob:k:

Amal · January 19, 2003, 2:47am

Re: meri poetry…

It’s lovely.:k:…hope to see more from you… keep it up:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 19, 2003, 4:07am

its beautiful:k::k:
keep posting and keep sharing:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 19, 2003, 4:09am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by punjabi kuri !!!: *

maybe hes stopped postin..
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 19, 2003, 12:09pm

Re: meri poetry...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by punjabi kuri !!!: *
rotay rotay hans diyay hum
tum aayey bhula diyay ghum
honton pay muskurahat
aankhain hain phir bhi nam
yeh tumhara kamal hay
ya duniya kay diyay huay zakham...
[/QUOTE]

Very Sweet ,Thanks for sharing Kuri:)

Philanthrope · January 19, 2003, 2:47pm

Wah :k:
Keep it Up yaar !

arifnawaz1 · January 20, 2003, 9:06am

Awesome :k::k::k:
Keep writing