Meri poetry ki akhri try

[IS]

I wrote this last year in july

mujh ko aisa lagta hay
kay jaise tum ab bhi kahi aas pass ho
kay chupke say
dheeray say
Nazroon ko jhukatay howay
thora sa sharmatay howay
barhi bay-rukhi say
meray pass say guzar jaoon gi
kay jab mai daikhnay lagoon tumko
apni nazroon ko meri nazroon say churaoo gi
kay tmharay haseen hontoon say
koi baat sunnay ki khawahish bas ik khawahish hi reh jiaye gi
gar mai karo koi baat
tu tum “nai”, “han”, “kyo” jaisay mukhtasir lafz keh kar apni jaan churaoo gi
ye rafaqat k chand haseen lamhay
shayad tum do-chaar roz mai hi bhool jaoo gi
aor
mujh jaisay chahnay walay ko
bhulanay mai ik umar lag jaiye gi

us k baad main ne poetry likhnay se toba kar li

[Innocent_Smile]

Re: Meri poetry ki akhri try

:k: IS bhai

lekin toba karny ki wajah?

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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v nice

roba ki hai shukar hai toba nai ki

[Amal]

Re: Meri poetry ki akhri try

I wrote this last year in july

mujh ko aisa lagta hay kay jaise tum ab bhi kahi aas pass ho kay chupke say dheeray say Nazroon ko jhukatay howay thora sa sharmatay howay barhi bay-rukhi say meray pass say guzar jaoon gi kay jab mai daikhnay lagoon tumko apni nazroon ko meri nazroon say churaoo gi kay tmharay haseen hontoon say koi baat sunnay ki khawahish bas ik khawahish hi reh jiaye gi gar mai karo koi baat tu tum "nai", "han", "kyo" jaisay mukhtasir lafz keh kar apni jaan churaoo gi ye rafaqat k chand haseen lamhay shayad tum do-chaar roz mai hi bhool jaoo gi aor mujh jaisay chahnay walay ko bhulanay mai ik umar lag jaiye gi

us k baad main ne poetry likhnay se toba kar li :D

IS bhai bohat achi nazm hey...umeed hey aap apni toba waapis ley kar mazeed likheiN ge :)

[ehsan]

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Nice. likhtay rahiye. :)

[jiia]

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mi ne hazaar bar tobah ki
kar k torr di
ab to mare tobah
jo mi kabhi toba karon:faizy:

ap bhi apni es TOBAH se TOBAH kar len ,orr
jaldi se phir raat ko esi taah se jaag kar
KUCH LIKH LEN

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

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ahaaN.. bohat achay.. achi nazm kahi.. likhtay rahiye :-)

[IS]

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@Innocent_Smile

:k: IS bhai

lekin toba karny ki wajah?

kyo k mujhe likhna hi nai ata crying
mere bas ki baat nai hay likhna

@_Masoom_Muskaan

v nice

roba ki hai shukar hai toba nai ki

mai ne toba hi likha hay

@Amal

IS bhai bohat achi nazm hey…umeed hey aap apni toba waapis ley kar mazeed likheiN ge

almost 1 saal ho gaya hay toba kiye howe

@ehsan

Nice. likhtay rahiye.

@jiia

mi ne hazaar bar tobah ki
kar k torr di
ab to mare tobah
jo mi kabhi toba karon:faizy:

ap bhi apni es TOBAH se TOBAH kar len ,orr
jaldi se phir raat ko esi taah se jaag kar
KUCH LIKH LEN

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

ahaaN.. bohat achay.. achi nazm kahi.. likhtay rahiye

Thanks All

[sarmad786]

Re: Meri poetry ki akhri try

I wrote this last year in july

mujh ko aisa lagta hay kay jaise tum ab bhi kahi aas pass ho kay chupke say dheeray say Nazroon ko jhukatay howay thora sa sharmatay howay barhi bay-rukhi say meray pass say guzar jaoon gi kay jab mai daikhnay lagoon tumko apni nazroon ko meri nazroon say churaoo gi kay tmharay haseen hontoon say koi baat sunnay ki khawahish bas ik khawahish hi reh jiaye gi gar mai karo koi baat tu tum "nai", "han", "kyo" jaisay mukhtasir lafz keh kar apni jaan churaoo gi ye rafaqat k chand haseen lamhay shayad tum do-chaar roz mai hi bhool jaoo gi aor mujh jaisay chahnay walay ko bhulanay mai ik umar lag jaiye gi

us k baad main ne poetry likhnay se toba kar li :D

zabardat IS bhai ...

Muhabbat Kay Sawaloon Ko Hawalay Mil Gaey Hotay
"Jahan Pholon Ko Khilna Tha Wahin Pay Khil Gaey Hotay"
"Miray Eman Ki Takmeel Bhi Asan Ho Jati
Farariyat Mujhay Bay-Simt Rastoon Par Na BhatKati
Zaroorat Mujh Ko Bay-Awaz Chehron Say Na MilWati
Hazaar Soratoon Main Yun Kabhi Tajseem Na Hota
Agar Tum Pass Rehtay Too
Main Yun TAQSEEM na Hota

[IS]

Re: Meri poetry ki akhri try

^ thanks sarmad bhai :sid:

[Azad]

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hummm