meri pehli nazm

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Re: meri pehli nazm

@chacha_Ghalib

so far i’ve only written ghazals… this is my first try at a nazm. I think there is room to add more but this is wot i have so far. There are a couple of places where i am not sure if i have used the right word or not but i’ll see if someone else points them out.

Nahi AFSOOS! main woh nahi:( Magar nazm kamal ki hy Allah kary zory qalam or ziada:lajawab:
PS: Ham new shuaraa ka dill rekhny waly logon main sy hain:chai: