so far i’ve only written ghazals… this is my first try at a nazm. I think there is room to add more but this is wot i have so far. There are a couple of places where i am not sure if i have used the right word or not but i’ll see if someone else points them out.
Re: meri pehli nazm
NICEE YEH TO KOI SHAIIIIIIIIR HE BTA SUKTA HAI MERE CHACHHAA :p
Re: meri pehli nazm
chacha haaN me wohi hai :p
v nice try chacha likhatye jaiey ab nazmaiN ap :)
Re: meri pehli nazm
Nahi AFSOOS! main woh nahi:( Magar nazm kamal ki hy Allah kary zory qalam or ziada:lajawab:
PS: Ham new shuaraa ka dill rekhny waly logon main sy hain:chai:
Re: meri pehli nazm
very nice :k:
Re: meri pehli nazm
nice effort g
Re: meri pehli nazm
buhat khoobsurat tehreer.. lag nahi raha k aap ne pehli baar nazm likhi.. 
Re: meri pehli nazm
thanx guys
aap wohi hain 
wah ri qismat… itnay lambay intezaar kay baad koi mila bhi to kaisa 
nikamma
thanx alot 
afsos :aq:
sahib ye to khushi ki baat hai kay aap woh nahin hain 
aap kay kaya kehnay… agar aap jaisy mehrbaan hum nai shuaraa ka dil na rakhain to hum dil-bardashta ho kar kaghaz kalam jala dain
thankoo
thanx guys
Re: meri pehli nazm
*i really liked it. very warm nazm. hope u'll share more
p.s. javaab kya aaya??
*
Re: meri pehli nazm
^ abhi tak nahin aya :(
thanx for the appreciation
Re: meri pehli nazm
wallah!! ^^ phir mud'aa (issue) badal den :D
Re: meri pehli nazm
bahut khoobsorat nazam hey,lagta nahi pehli dafa likhi gae hay,jo ghazal likh lay wo her form main likh sakta hay kiyuonkay paband ghazal likhna mushkal kaam hay.is nazam main
umeed-E-rut-e-bahar lay kar
ki jaga agar sirf
umeed-e-bahar lay ker .....
hota to flow shayad aur ziada hota
jo aap nay likha wo bhi theek hay