Meri Pehli Ghazal 2 saal pehlay ke

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

IS January 16, 2005, 6:55pm 1

**mian har chooot kay baad sabalna chata hoon **
mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon

nahi karta intazar waqat! kesi ka
mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon

**lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay **
**mien un lamhoon ko qaid karna chata hoon **

**jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam **
**logoo mien ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon **

**muj say jitna be ho Naraz wo aay dil **
mein usay hameesha khush deakhna chata hoon

Golden_Scorpion_1 January 17, 2005, 4:51am 2

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Koyal January 17, 2005, 7:29pm 3

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nice

IS January 17, 2005, 7:56pm 4

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Thanks

Shab-e-Hijar January 17, 2005, 8:29pm 5

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nice :k:
keep it up

IS January 18, 2005, 8:28am 6

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Thanks

dil_dhoondta January 18, 2005, 8:49am 7

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very nice

Sinner January 18, 2005, 8:50am 8

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wow ... nice .... awesome ... lovely

IS January 18, 2005, 8:58am 9

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Thanks

IS January 18, 2005, 8:58am 10

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sukriya ji sukriya

reet January 18, 2005, 10:08am 11

Re: Meri Pehli Ghazal 2 saal pehlay ke

lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay
mien un lamhoon ko qaid karna chata hoon

bahot khoob…:k::k:

IS January 18, 2005, 3:56pm 12

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Thanks u very much