Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

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ghazal no= 6 INSHA JI mer fav poet :wub:

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*insha ji utho **aab kooch karo *
*is shehar main ji ko lagana kiya *

*weshi ko sakoon se kiya matlab *
*jogi ka nagar main thikana kiya *

*is dil kay darida daman main *
*dekho to sahi socho to sahi *

*jis jholi main so chayd hoay *
*us jholi ka phaylana kiya *

*shab beti chand bhi doob chala *
*zanjeer pari darwazay main
*
*kion dair gaey gher aey ho *
*sajni se karo gay bahana kiya
*

*jab shehar k log na rasta dain *
*kion bun main na ja bisraam karay *

*diwano ki si na baat karay *
*to aur karay diwana kiya *

*wehshi ko sakoon se kiya matlab *
*jogi ka nagar main thikana kiya
*
*~

specially yi shair

**is dil kay darida daman main **dekho to sahi socho to sahi *
*jis jholi main so chayd hoay **us jholi ka phaylana kiya *:snooty:

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

rafoo karwalo :snooty:

waise I love this ghazal

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

ghazal no: 7 :snooty: :hoonh: :teary1:

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Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

khawa makhawa hi hansty hain

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

hanji indirctly TNZIA hansty hy
dil halka ho jata hy
kabhi ap hansy bohat der ese hi kisi k sath mil k
me orr mera bhai mil bohat der hanste thy :lifey:BILAWAJA
ham aj b yad kerty hein :blush:

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

hasrat hi hai k…

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

8- my most fav

vo poetry jo me akser gungunati b rehti hun :snooty:

MAI NI ME EK SHIKRA YAAR BANAYA
:xeno:
by ~ SHIV KUMAR BATALVI ~

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***-Maye Ni Maye, ***Main Ek Shikra Yaar Banaya,

***//**mother hey mother ****i befriended a hawk

****-ohde Sir De Kalgi, Te pairi Jhanjhar,
**te O Chog Chuginda Aaya,

**//*A plume on his head, n bells on his feet
*//he came pecking 4 grain

****-Ek ohde Roop Dee Dhup Teekheri,
**te Dooja Mehka Da Tirhaya,

*//one, his beauty was as sharp as perfumes
*//n 2nd, was thirsty fragrance

****_Teeja ohda Rang Gulabi,
**ho Kise Gori Maa Da Jaya
,
*//3rd his color was d color of rose
*//born from a fair mother

****_Ishqe Da Ek Palang Nawari,
**ve Assan Channania vich daya,
**Tann Di Chaaddar Ho Gayi Maili,
**Os Pair Ja Palgi Paya,

*//i laid a bed of love
*//in the moonlight
*//my body sheet was stained
*//d instant he laid his foot on my bed!

****_Ni ohde chet di aathan
**ate zulfee saavan chaaya
**hothaa de vich kahte da
**koi dihoon chadne te aaya

*//his eyes were an evenning in spring
*//his hair a dark cloud
*//his lips, a rising autumn dawn

****_Dukkhan mere Naina De Koye,
**Te vich Harh Hanjua Da Aaya,
**Sari Raat gayi vich socha,
**Us A Ki zulm Kamaaya,

*//corners of my eyes hurt
*//n a flood of tears engulfed me
*//all night went thinking
*//what he did this 2 me

****_Bolla de vich paun pure di
ni o koilaan da hamsaaya
**chitte dand jyon dhaano bagla
**tori maar udaaya

//his words had eastern breeze blowing
//like d sound of a blackbird (nightingale)
//his smile was d whiteness of a crane in d rice field
//taking flight at d clap of a hand

****_Subha Savere Laini Vattna,
**ve Assa Mal Mal os Navaya,
**Dehi de vicho Niklan Chin gaa,
**te saada Haath Gaya kumlaya,

*//early in d morning, with vattna (a paste used to cleansing skin)
*//i scrubbed n bathed my body
*//bt embers kept bursting out
*//n my hands flagged

****-Choori Kuttta Ta O Khanda Naahi,
**ve Assa Dil Da Maas Khwaya,
**Ek Udaari Aisi Maari,
**O Mud Vatnee Na Aaya,

*//prepared choorma bt he doesnt eat
*//i gave him the flesh of m heart
*//he took such a takeoff
*//never came back home


Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

poet kon hai?

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

yi pata nhai dhundna pary ga

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

~~:( ~~ BPL MITTI DEYA BAWIYA ,TU KION NAI BOLDA ~~:snooty: ~~

bol mitti diyya baweya , tere dukhaN ne maar muka liya
mera sohna mahi , ajaAAAAAAAAAA mitti da mE bawa bananYA, uttey tahn ditti ya khesi
vatana vaaley maan karan, ki maen maan karahn pardesi
mera sohna maahi ,aja AAAAAAAA

buhe agey lavaN berriyaN,
gallhan ghar ghar howan teriyaN te meriyaN
maenu sakal dikha ja ,aja AAAAAAA

gam vich tere dholana, sanu maf kareeN manda bolna
maenu sakal dikha ja ,aja AAAAAAAA

bol mitti diya baweya, ho bol Mitti diya baweya
kiyon nahi bolda, poora kiyon nahi tolda,
dillhan dee ghundi kion nahi kholda

Jad mayeeyat nazreeN avandi,
chheti karhan upa

pani sambahn baeth key,
tuhN dittey khoob lava

maa dhee nu mattaN daindi
tu maya wich mohi ni

taenu laaj kisey dee nahi,
sirr dee lathee loyee ni

sahib da darvaja neewaN
tu pagRi uthayee ni

sham saverey gafal kuRiye
suteyaN raen vihayee ni

kee hoya,kee hoya taenu
charkhey tand na payee ni

banh baethee panj phoolaN raani
ghar wich hukam chalayee ni

nau darvajey mahal terey de
uchah bahut banaya ni

Jis koloh tu kotha leeta
karaj na lahvayeya ni

nadi kinarey dhaab rait dee
kandh rait dee payee ni

sham saverey gafal kuRiye
suteyaN raen bihayee ni

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

Ap sy Pahla Question Ya Ha K Ya Khan Sahb Kon Han, Jinain Ap ny dedcat ki Ha Pahli Poem? Imran Khan ?

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

:smack: jall kia kamal sawal pucha hy :cb:

:omg:

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

Mujy answer dain, Janaab. Ya b is thread ka hisaa ha. Questinz tou bohat sy Karnay Han.

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

Lovd thez linez.. Jis Dhajj Sy Koi Maktal ko Gaya Vo Shaan Salamaat Rahti Ha. Ya jan tou Ani jani han.. Is jan Ki Koi Bat Nhe.... alaa

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

cheti cheti karo.. aakhri poem :hbk:

peeche lambi line hai

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

acha bas aj
ya phir kal inshallah

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

US DUKH KA NAAM BETI RAKHNA :snooty:

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KHALLAS ~~ X~~

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

:lajawab:

aap ke tashreef awri ka shukria… aap ke sath Sara Shagufta ki kitaab aur phoolon ka tuhfa jae ga

:flowers:

aankhen_saaraa_shaguftaa

ek_thii_saaraa_

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

best :k: