Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (jiia)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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bulle sha koe rakht vihaj le:teary3:
NAI TY BAZI LE GAI KUTTY :snooty:

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Jiiaaa Rocked, everyone shocked :cb: :biggthumb:

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4-:snooty:

Mera Kuch Saamaan Tumhare Paas Pada Hai :hoonh:
Saavan Ke Kuch Bheege Bheege Din Rakhe Hain:(
Aur Mere Ik Khat Main Lipti Raat Padi Hai:o
Vo Raat Bhulaa Do :o

Patjhad Hai Kcuh … Hai Na ?
Patjhas Main Kuch Patton Ke Girne Kee Aahat
Kaanon Main Ek Baar Pahan Ke Laut Aai Thee
Patajhad Kee Vo Saakh Abhi Tak Kaanp Rahi Hai
Vo Saakh Gira Do,

Ek Akeli Chhataree Main Jab Aadhe Aadhe Bheeg Rahe The
Aadhe Sookhe Aadhe Geele, Sukha To Main Le Aaye Thee
Geela Man Shayad Bistar Ke Paas Pada Ho Vo Bhijwa Do,

Ek So Sola Chaand Ki Ratain Ek Tumhare Kaandhe Ka Til
Geeli Mahendi Ki Khushbu, Jhoot Mooth Ke Shikwe Kuch
Jhooth Mooth Ke Wade Sab Yaad Karaa Do Sab Bhijwa Do

Ek Ijaazat De Do Bas, Jab Isako Dafanaaungee
Main Bhi Vaheen So Jaungee
Main Bhi Vaheen So Jaungee

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**~~Ajj Akhan Waris shah nuu~~
**

aj aakhan waaris shah noo kito.n qabra.n vicho.n bol!
te aj kitab-e-ishq da koi agla varka phol!

ik roi si dhii punjab dii tuu likh-likh mare vain
aj lakkha.n dheeyan rondian tainuu.n waaris shah noon kahan

uth darmandan diaa dardiiaa uTh tak apna punjaab!
aj bele laashaa.n vichiiaa.n te lahu dii bharii chenaab!

kise ne panja paania.n vich dittii zahir rala!
te unhaa.n paaniaa.n dharat nuu.n dittaa paanii laa!

jitthe vajdii phuuk pyaar di ve oh vanjhli gayi guaach
ranjhe de sab veer aj bhul gaye usdi jaach

dharti te lahu vasiya, qabran payiyan choN
preet diyan shaahazaadiiaa.n aj vich mazaaraa.n roN

aj sab ‘qaido’ ban gaye, husn ishq de chor
aj kitho.n liaaiie labbh ke waaris shah ik hor

aj aakhan waaris shah noon kito.n qabra.n vicho.n bol!
te aj kitab-e-ishq da koi agla varka phol!

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For those who can’t read Punjabi Here is English Translation
I say to Waris Shah today, speak from your grave

And add a new page to your book of love
Once one daughter of Punjab wept, and you wrote your long saga;

Today thousands weep, calling to you Waris Shah:

Arise, o friend of the afflicted; arise and see the state of Punjab,
Corpses strewn on fields, and the Chenaab flowing with much blood.

Someone filled the five rivers with poison,
And this same water now irrigates our soil.

Where was lost the flute, where the songs of love sounded?
And all Ranjha’s brothers forgotten to play the flute.

Blood has rained on the soil, graves are oozing with blood,
The princesses of love cry their hearts out in the graveyards.

Today all the Quaido’ns have become the thieves of love and beauty,
Where can we find another one like Waris Shah?

Waris Shah! I say to you, speak from your grave
And add a new page to your book of love.

by AMARTA PERITAM

http://aaminaamjad.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/amrita_pritam.jpg?w=210&h=300

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:k:

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:lajawab:

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This one is so heartbreaking! And so suggestive. lol

I love these:

“Ek So Sola Chaand Ki Ratain Ek Tumhare Kaandhe Ka Til”
So true. Sometimes we get fixated on things like that.

“Aur Mere Ik Khat Main Lipti Raat Padi Hai
Vo Raat Bhulaa Do”
As if it’s that easy.

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Dogs cannot be superior to humans, as Allah ordained humans to be ashraf-ul-makhlooqaat.

Ibaadat ke liye tu farishtay bhi kaafi thay.

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:lajawab:

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to insan muft me ashfal makhloqat ban gaya :blush:
kuch to esa hoga na k vo farishton orr baqi makhloqat se superior hua

kia ???:slight_smile:

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Definitely bohut kuch hai aisa. But that’s my point, ke I don’t like the analogy with dogs.

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eska matlab yehi hy k
ager insan ko yi nhai pata k vo kion ashrfalmakgloqat hy
to dono same status per hi hyn
kia kutton k k kan nahi aankh nhai aqal nahi
ya vo bachy nhai peda kerty :slight_smile:

apny philosophy nhai perhi na :cb:
insan dakht hn
darkht kutty hein
es liay kutty insan hein
samj aaya :omg:

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i agree with you 100%...Allah has created man in 'His Image'. Insaan meN sha'oor hone kii vajah se use intiKHaab kii taaqat dii aur saHeeH aur Ghalat meN tameez 'ataa kii aur isii par uskaa roz e qayaamat faisla bhii honaa hai.

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umm what?
Sorry, carry on with your poetry. I won’t derail your thread.
I take that poem to mean ke agar insaan apni achi sifaat use nahi karta, jo sha’oor Allah ne diya hai usay ache kaamon main use nahi karta tu phir what is the diff between animals and humans.
But I think jokes like “men are dogs” are just in poor taste.

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Bulleh Shah is not comparing all humans with dogs. He is comparing soul-less creatures with dogs. People who do pray all night, but not for the sake of God, but for show-off

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hamji esa hi hy k ager insan………….to ……..
last line slybus me hy
mene philosophy ki book me perha tha ……..foe example

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es per bohat baat ho sakti hy
alga se aik thread open ker len

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That makes more sense.

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pehle 10 to poori kar len :snooty:

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oh han:smack: aati to esi k liay hun
phir bhul jati hun :cb: aa k
busy hun bohat :bummer: